Kristofer 1,032 Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 I've been procrastinating on this short write-up for a couple of months now, but since I got Director Krennic, I feel as if I'm obliged to push this out as soon as possible. I no longer play my previous character, Arathilion Xalrich, but I genuinely enjoyed playing him as a character and developing him overtime on the server. This is a general backstory of Arathilion Xalrich from before the formation of the Galactic Empire, and during the execution of Order 66. A Lost Feeling 2 3 Link to post Share on other sites
Bailey 3,345 Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 If I hadn't had seen "Arathillion Xalrich" I'd have though this was a resignation g, don't scare me like that. Nice story too. Link to post Share on other sites
Eren 775 Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Damn you're actually not bad at writing. Also, didn't the Xalrich surname start out as an inside joke between dirthi, you and me with 3 brothers or something? Maybe I'm remembering it wrong. Link to post Share on other sites
Delta 1,030 Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Good story Kris Link to post Share on other sites
TheNegotiator 83 Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Timothy Zahn like story telling. PTSD of the Rise of Skywalker... "It's just a feeling". Xalrich is a Jedi confirmed. Order 66 was an inside job. What about the Sand People. When do you believe you will finish the story? When do I believe I would get around to writing up mine? Who knows... Link to post Share on other sites
Xavier 18 Posted March 10, 2020 Report Share Posted March 10, 2020 Nice story. Link to post Share on other sites
SCHEFF 818 Posted March 10, 2020 Report Share Posted March 10, 2020 3 hours ago, TheNegotiator said: Timothy Zahn like story telling. PTSD of the Rise of Skywalker... "It's just a feeling". Xalrich is a Jedi confirmed. Order 66 was an inside job. What about the Sand People. When do you believe you will finish the story? When do I believe I would get around to writing up mine? Who knows... In the next episode of Dragonball Z... 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Welly 159 Posted March 11, 2020 Report Share Posted March 11, 2020 I like the switch from narratives, it flows nicely. Amazing stuff, no suprise though since it's one of your works. Link to post Share on other sites
Dirthi 227 Posted March 12, 2020 Report Share Posted March 12, 2020 I've taught you well 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Luigi 338 Posted March 12, 2020 Report Share Posted March 12, 2020 This clearly displays Newton Feniki as the best Jedi Padawan to exist. Very interesting read, worth the 5 minutes. Eagerly look forward to the next installment Link to post Share on other sites
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