Advisor Kristofer Posted March 9, 2020 Advisor Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 I've been procrastinating on this short write-up for a couple of months now, but since I got Director Krennic, I feel as if I'm obliged to push this out as soon as possible. I no longer play my previous character, Arathilion Xalrich, but I genuinely enjoyed playing him as a character and developing him overtime on the server. This is a general backstory of Arathilion Xalrich from before the formation of the Galactic Empire, and during the execution of Order 66. A Lost Feeling 2 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bailey Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 If I hadn't had seen "Arathillion Xalrich" I'd have though this was a resignation g, don't scare me like that. Nice story too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eren Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Damn you're actually not bad at writing. Also, didn't the Xalrich surname start out as an inside joke between dirthi, you and me with 3 brothers or something? Maybe I'm remembering it wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Good story Kris Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNegotiator Posted March 9, 2020 Report Share Posted March 9, 2020 Timothy Zahn like story telling. PTSD of the Rise of Skywalker... "It's just a feeling". Xalrich is a Jedi confirmed. Order 66 was an inside job. What about the Sand People. When do you believe you will finish the story? When do I believe I would get around to writing up mine? Who knows... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xavier Posted March 10, 2020 Report Share Posted March 10, 2020 Nice story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCHEFF Posted March 10, 2020 Report Share Posted March 10, 2020 3 hours ago, TheNegotiator said: Timothy Zahn like story telling. PTSD of the Rise of Skywalker... "It's just a feeling". Xalrich is a Jedi confirmed. Order 66 was an inside job. What about the Sand People. When do you believe you will finish the story? When do I believe I would get around to writing up mine? Who knows... In the next episode of Dragonball Z... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welly Posted March 11, 2020 Report Share Posted March 11, 2020 I like the switch from narratives, it flows nicely. Amazing stuff, no suprise though since it's one of your works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirthi Posted March 12, 2020 Report Share Posted March 12, 2020 I've taught you well 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigi Posted March 12, 2020 Report Share Posted March 12, 2020 This clearly displays Newton Feniki as the best Jedi Padawan to exist. Very interesting read, worth the 5 minutes. Eagerly look forward to the next installment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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