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  • Steam Name:
    xotic_profitz9
  • SteamID32:
    STEAM_0:1:455412168
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  • In Game Name:
    Craig
  • Time Played Imperial RP:
    4w 4d 
  • Time Played Imperial RP Evidence:
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  • Have you had any warns (If so state them)?
  • I  have not had any warnings
  • Have you had any bans (If so state them)?
    No bans
  • Have you been staff on any other servers or communities (If so state them)?
    No i have not

 

  • Why are you applying to be an Event Master?
    I am applying to be an event master because as a kid id always imagine making my own star wars battles with Lego and if I became an event master this would allow me to do exactly that! But in Gmod of course. It also allows me to have lots of fun and also be able to  interact  with real people which would make it better. I'm applying because i want to use my knowledge to create fun and exiting events that not just i will enjoy but the community and players involved, iv been playing on the server for around 4 months and have participate in many event myself, so i would like to do some of my own and give back to the community for making my dream of always being apart of a star wars role play type experience come true, I want to give it everything I have and I want to try my best to satisfy other players!  

 

  • What do you believe you can bring to the Event Master team?
    I believe i can bring my creative mindset into the role, i want to make role play more fun and give players a good star wars event, using my knowledge of star wars and using it to make cool events, I believe I can contribute more ideas to the other event masters and make more inclusive events that focus on a wide majority of different  aspects of the event of a wide range of regiments
  • I have been running little events (Approved by EMs) for the 501, Med troopers, ISB and shock. I have been given really good feed back to them saying that they were really fun and the role play was very interesting and not boring. They also said that the events were really thought out and were some what simple but effective. i have planned other mini event on a document i have supplied down below ( Only ideas, not fully fleshed out)

 

  • What do you believe you can do to make Events more fun, enjoyable and inclusive?
    I believe the way to make events more fun is to utilies every regiments abilities to give them a purpose and make them feel useful in most events, by including more regiments into the event it will make them feel as if it isn't just for one regiment and that will motivate players to wanna play more and to expand their role play abilities. making unique events and not just an attack from  a group of enemies attacking the ISD and so on. 
  • Using my knowlegde of Star Wars and giving it a personal twist to keep it Star Wars but making it fit every role and making it more enjoyable. Although i do wish to do individual event for regiments i want to include legions for each event so more than just one regiment is having some fun. Obviously i cant always do it but i want to try as much as i can 

 

  • Do you have basic knowledge of ULX commands?
    Yes i have a basic understanding on how ULX commands work

 

  • Anything else you would like to add?
    After reading the comments I have changed my application a lot so I hope I can change some people’s minds! Thanks for your feedback 
  • I will listen to other people’s feedback after every event I manage and I will always adjust myself to fit what is needed of me! Will listen to suggestions as well!
  • im a very active player, i have over 600 hours on the server in a couple months and i'm on everyday for more than 5 hours, weekends i can play up to 8+ hours, im respectful of people on the server and always try my best to follow orders or do what people ask me to do. For the most part i would like to believe that i do so.

 

 

 

 

  • Terms & Conditions
    Yes, i accept the terms and conditions of the title of EM and the responsibility that comes with it. I will not miss use the tools and the ability that comes with this role. 
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Finished re-doing my application please re read it and give me feedback or hopefully change your mind. updated time played. Adding More ideas and updated my time Updating more info to the app. Updating time
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Looking through the application, though it is quite short, and would do well to include some more detail and better formatting for your event ideas, all of the info is there.  It shows an advanced view on the EM team covering all of the areas we try to cover, if you are able to withhold these standards and idea's, i believe you could be a great member of the team!

After re thinking my response ima end up leaving you with a Neutral

It is great to see you taking feedback from the community and being open to change and making you application better, because of this i will be bumping my vote up to a +1 As reacting to feedback is a good way to become a better EM if/when you get it.  As well as that they changes you made make this into a better application worthy of a +1.

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I'll be altering my response to a neutral

 

After  some chatting with the guy he seemed  genuine  about his intentions and dedication to join the team.

After rereading his application  and his event ideas I can see that he has the mindset of a Trial Event Master.

 

P.S: I apologise for  the outburst and calling out in said manner,  from my perspective it seemed as if he was attempting to advertise.

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Yeah sorry I'm currenty going to be giving a -1 sorry

Your application lacks a lot of detail with the longest of your answers other than the event ideas being a single sentence. 

continuing on your event ideas while I like their ideas you have barely fleshed out the event and honestly are realy short as well

I also know you in game but have not talked with you much 

again if you can improve on this I will probably change my response

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Sorry mate, but I'm gonna have to go with a -1

 Your application seems fairly generic and seems rushed or didn't have a lot of thought put into it.

Your event ideas seem more like concepts and don't have enough detail in how it will be conducted, they need more depth and detail.

On 1/29/2020 at 8:55 PM, Mongo said:

I suggest you take a look at some of the accepted applications to see what it takes to become an Event Master.

You should also take more time in detailing your application and event ideas. 

Get that much needed planning for your events and put more time in, and I might change my vote

Edit:

Your application is a lot more fleshed out and provides a lot of detail into your motivations for becoming an EM.

As a member of VF, I know you well and believe you to be a trustworthy member of the community.

While some stats of the event characters need some tweaking, your event ideas are pretty solid with detailed descriptions of the Event character's loadouts

I'll be changing my vote to a +1

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On 1/29/2020 at 8:55 PM, Wind said:

It is great to see you taking feedback from the community and being open to change and making you application better, because of this i will be bumping my vote up to a +1 As reacting to feedback is a good way to become a better EM if/when you get it.  As well as that they changes you made make this into a better application worthy of a +1.

 

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On 1/29/2020 at 8:56 PM, Joel said:

Yeah sorry I'm currenty going to be giving a -1 sorry

Your application lacks a lot of detail with the longest of your answers other than the event ideas being a single sentence. 

continuing on your event ideas while I like their ideas you have barely fleshed out the event and honestly are realy short as well

I also know you in game but have not talked with you much 

again if you can improve on this I will probably change my response

I will be change it to +1 as he has improve his event idea alot

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On 1/30/2020 at 4:15 PM, Goliath said:

-1

Horrid event ideas.

I actually quite strongly disagree with this statement. Your event ideas do sound quite enjoyable and although they are basic you have expanded upon so it’s not quite as simple as they first seem. My main problem is the formatting of this application and the detail within it, add information such as EC weapons, health, models and roles.

ill be leaving a NEUTRAL as I believe you have potential.

EDIT: Changing to a +1 as the applicant has listened to feedback and made improvements where needed.

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On 1/30/2020 at 7:17 PM, Rivers said:

I actually quite strongly disagree with this statement. Your event ideas do sound quite enjoyable and although they are basic you have expanded upon so it’s not quite as simple as they first seem. My main problem is the formatting of this application and the detail within it, add information such as EC weapons, health, models and roles.

ill be leaving a NEUTRAL as I believe you have potential.

Couldn't have put it better myself.

Neutral.

Edit: After seeing the improvement of detail on this application I will be changing my response to a +1.

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On 1/30/2020 at 7:17 PM, Rivers said:

I actually quite strongly disagree with this statement. Your event ideas do sound quite enjoyable and although they are basic you have expanded upon so it’s not quite as simple as they first seem. My main problem is the formatting of this application and the detail within it, add information such as EC weapons, health, models and roles.

ill be leaving a NEUTRAL as I believe you have potential.

I agree with this

Neutral 

Edit

Since you, have updated you event documents i will be changing into a +1

I do now know much details about him but since Pro knows him i'm going to take he's a trust worthy person.

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Also i disagree with your statement Goliath

@Mongo You actually have any proof of him advertise and by the way from what i heard you already replied and already posted your opinion, and he just asked you to check it out just saying, it would be better if you actually have proof since people can be deceptive.

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+1

- Craig is a kind and genuine guy! He will always performs his hardest at everything!

- Active on the server/community and is reliable

- Extremely trustworthy! 

- Has potential!

 

Good luck Craig :)

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I will currently be NEUTRAL I will change to a +1 if you check your spelling, grammar and punctuation. You are a nice guy and I do like the Event Ideas.

EDIT:

I will be changing this to a +1, I have watched you try your best in fixing up all the changes, I hope you get EM.

P.S. on my phone and I cannot find the colour section for it but yes this is a +1.

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Disclaimer: Writing on my phone.

Craig, 

This response will entail my personal criticisms from your response to all questions and your forming of all event ideas.

Response to the Questions:

Your response to the questions are adequate although contain no more than a basic response to the question. I understand that you have a passion for creating stories and situations for people to deal with but you must decide what is unique to you and you alone. This way you can break away from the generic responses and surprise the assessors looking to take people in.

Event Idea One:

As you have built this entire event on the assumption of having only five characters, I suggest you edit the maximum cap to only five. Having seven characters would be pointless after looking over the heavy reliance on having just five characters. 

Description 

Your reasoning for the presence of the Rebels onboard the ISD appears confusing. I understand that they be onboard to steal Imperial information, although I do not understand why they would be looking for a base that the Empire can’t find? Detail in your description is key for the execution of your entire event. If it is a grammatical error, I suggest you fix it when you can.

Intro

A recurring feature I have seen throughout this event idea is that it is almost entirely dependant on luck, which is not something event masters receive much of when meta-gaming is such a prevalent issue. Unless naval personnel are not doing their job properly, there is no chance of an un-scheduled supply ship arriving out of nowhere being let on. Major editing needs to be done on this part.

Continuing on, another issue with the introduction is the assumption that the Empire won’t find any of the explosives found in the crates and they will just skim over the obvious bombs located inside. If it is just a supply run, you could possibly edit the intro to say that the bombs themselves aren’t built yet although the components to build them are inside the crate. Doing this won’t jeopardise your entire event. You also cannot assume that you won’t have an escort with you at all times. Assuming this with no alternative will once again jeopardise your event.

Main 

The likelihood of this entire section even happening is very low due to you having already completed your task of dropping off supplies. Nonetheless, multiple issues plague this section of the event and they must be pointed out. The idea of one of the rebels creating a distraction of which you assume a large amount of people will respond to will also jeopardise your event. This is because once one of the supply personnel attempts to kill a CL5+ (of which you will be very hard to get alone), the entire team will have a warrant for their arrest, ruining any chance of your event continuing. Moving onwards, you once again assume that your characters will have no issue whatsoever just waltzing into the engine room to place an EMP, of which people may yell about in OOC due to it needing to be placed in the reactor room to have any major effect.

After somehow being able to place the EMP precisely, you again rely on luck to get you onto the bridge. You must remember that the entirety of navy almost always resides in one channel alone in TeamSpeak and will have instant communications between one another, leaving you little chance of being cleared onto the bridge. If by some chance you get cleared, I will continue from the bridge soon although you cannot also assume that their won’t be a massive amount of security personnel on the BSD. On top of this, having known that Chimaera Squad is equipped with E-11Ds, they will make very quick work of any rebels on the BSD. Assuming that you kill them all, you also assume that none of them contact anyone to assist them on the BSD. Assuming that you kill them all and they contact no-one, you also have to assume that your either damaged or healthy rebels will be able to win any firefight on the bridge. If they did have to fight Chimaera on the BSD and won, Navy would know in an instant and Chimaera would spawn instantly on the Bridge, sandwiching your troops (they would be breaking NLR in this sense although you cannot assume that none of them will break it for the sake of getting EC kills). I like the idea of distracting personnel by blowing bombs, although you also assume that your CL5 hostage situation hasn’t ended poorly. If your hostage makes it to EVO bunks, you can be assured that no one will believe that rebel troops are bolstering your single rebel inside their bunks. You must also assume that no one is in the bunks. Continuing onwards, assuming that your four horseman of the apocalypse destroy a small army on the bridge and activate the EMP, Chimaera can easily use the maintenance access port to return onto the bridge. 
 

End

Assuming that their is a major issue with personnel getting access to the bridge, you cannot simply destroy the glass-like windows on the bridge and I have never seen them destroyed for good reason. Your rebels would need access to space suits somehow and have a monumental explosive large enough to destroy the bridges windows. Now that the bridge has open access to space, it would cause a world of trouble to explain and make sense for everyone else due to the issues that come with it (of which I do not have the time to explain, you can list the reasons yourself). The rest of the event is fine from here on out.

Final Remarks: 

Now, I am currently writing up an entire breakdown of Event Idea 2 although I do not have the time to write it up along with this post. If I find the time, I will end up adding the breakdown but for now you will have to take in that of just the first event. From listing the issues with the first event along with the questions, I will currently be leaving a -1
 

You hold potential  Craig, although you need to make some serious edits to what you have submitted. Then and only then will my mind be changed. Hopefully this criticism is what you were looking for. 
 

Edit: Contrary to what some individuals think, your ideas are great, although the run down and it’s intended executions are where the errors begin to pop up. Work on the executions, talk to people in the event team and any retired EM’s you know and I’m sure they’ll be able to give you pointers. Please do not let this post discourage you. I want nothing more then to see applicants succeed.

 

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51 minutes ago, taki said:

Disclaimer: Writing on my phone.

Craig, 

This response will entail my personal criticisms from your response to all questions and your forming of all event ideas.

Response to the Questions:

Your response to the questions are adequate although contain no more than a basic response to the question. I understand that you have a passion for creating stories and situations for people to deal with but you must decide what is unique to you and you alone. This way you can break away from the generic responses and surprise the assessors looking to take people in.

Event Idea One:

As you have built this entire event on the assumption of having only five characters, I suggest you edit the maximum cap to only five. Having seven characters would be pointless after looking over the heavy reliance on having just five characters. 

Description 

Your reasoning for the presence of the Rebels onboard the ISD appears confusing. I understand that they be onboard to steal Imperial information, although I do not understand why they would be looking for a base that the Empire can’t find? Detail in your description is key for the execution of your entire event. If it is a grammatical error, I suggest you fix it when you can.

Intro

A recurring feature I have seen throughout this event idea is that it is almost entirely dependant on luck, which is not something event masters receive much of when meta-gaming is such a prevalent issue. Unless naval personnel are not doing their job properly, there is no chance of an un-scheduled supply ship arriving out of nowhere being let on. Major editing needs to be done on this part.

Continuing on, another issue with the introduction is the assumption that the Empire won’t find any of the explosives found in the crates and they will just skim over the obvious bombs located inside. If it is just a supply run, you could possibly edit the intro to say that the bombs themselves aren’t built yet although the components to build them are inside the crate. Doing this won’t jeopardise your entire event. You also cannot assume that you won’t have an escort with you at all times. Assuming this with no alternative will once again jeopardise your event.

Main 

The likelihood of this entire section even happening is very low due to you having already completed your task of dropping off supplies. Nonetheless, multiple issues plague this section of the event and they must be pointed out. The idea of one of the rebels creating a distraction of which you assume a large amount of people will respond to will also jeopardise your event. This is because once one of the supply personnel attempts to kill a CL5+ (of which you will be very hard to get alone), the entire team will have a warrant for their arrest, ruining any chance of your event continuing. Moving onwards, you once again assume that your characters will have no issue whatsoever just waltzing into the engine room to place an EMP, of which people may yell about in OOC due to it needing to be placed in the reactor room to have any major effect.

After somehow being able to place the EMP precisely, you again rely on luck to get you onto the bridge. You must remember that the entirety of navy almost always reside in once channel alone in TeamSpeak and will have instant communications between one another, leaving you little chance of being cleared onto the bridge. If by some chance you get cleared, I will continue from the bridge soon although you cannot also assume that their won’t be a massive amount of security personnel on the BSD. On top of this, having known that Chimaera Squad is equipped with E-11Ds, they will make very quick work of any rebels on the BSD. Assuming that you kill them all, you also assume that none of them contact anyone to assist them on the BSD. Assuming that you kill them all and they contact no-one, you also have to assume that your either damaged or healthy rebels will be able to win any firefight on the bridge. If they did have to fight Chimaera on the BSD and won, Navy would know in an instant and Chimaera would spawn instantly on the Bridge, sandwiching your troops (they would be breaking NLR in this sense although you cannot assume that none of them will break it for the sake of getting EC kills). I like the idea of distracting personnel by blowing bombs, although you also assume that your CL5 hostage situation hasn’t ended poorly. If your hostage makes it to EVO bunks, you can be assured that no one will believe that rebel troops are bolstering your single rebel inside their bunks. You must also assume that no one is in the bunks. Continuing onwards, assuming that your four horseman of the apocalypse destroy a small army on the bridge and activate the EMP, Chimaera can easily use the maintenance access port to return onto the bridge. 
 

End

Assuming that their is a major issue with personnel getting access to the bridge, you cannot simply destroy the glass-like windows on the bridge and I have never seen them destroyed for good reason. Your rebels would need access to space suits somehow and have a monumental explosive large enough to destroy the bridges windows. Now that the bridge has open access to space, it would cause a world of trouble to explain and make sense for everyone else due to the issues that come with it (of which I do not have the time to explain, you can list the reasons yourself). The rest of the event is fine from here on out.

Final Remarks: 

Now, I am currently writing up an entire breakdown of Event Idea 2 although I do not have the time to write it up along with this post. If I find the time, I will end up adding the breakdown but for now you will have to take in that of just the first event. From listing the issues with the first event along with the questions, I will currently .be leaving a -1
 

You hold potential  Craig, although you need to make some serious edits to what you have submitted. Then and only then will my mind be changed. Hopefully this criticism is what you were looking for.

 

Thanks for the feedback, this is what I’m looking for so thank you, I will try and make some changes to it

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On 1/29/2020 at 10:25 PM, Mongo said:

-1

Ideas are short and feel rushed, they could easily be more fleshed out and with proper planning

Application is short with short answers.

No idea who you are.

I suggest you take a look at some of the accepted applications to see what it takes to become an Event Master.

You should also take more time in detailing your application and event ideas. 

 

 

I was meant to say thank for the feedback but forgot to say  it. but thank you

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On 1/30/2020 at 2:15 PM, Goliath said:

-1

Horrid event ideas.

^ Shouldn't be saying that. Its ok to state your opinion but on a application which is supposed to be serious isn't good how would you except the community to grow if your just going to shut people down by saying "Horrid event Ideas" when they take all that time planning it out hoping it will be fun and equal for everyone. From what I heard is that its hard to make a event that hasn't been done before where almost like 3 years correct me if i'm wrong. But you shouldn't be doing that you should be telling him how he could approve the event not shaming him about it because it not being  2 your standers. I didn't expected to see this from a Jdev doesn't look good Goilath. Down vote this is you want it doesn't take back what you said this is just my Opinion but you should apologize too him. That's all I have to say I hope this just doesn't happen again.

On 1/30/2020 at 5:17 PM, Rivers said:

I actually quite strongly disagree with this statement. Your event ideas do sound quite enjoyable and although they are basic you have expanded upon so it’s not quite as simple as they first seem. My main problem is the formatting of this application and the detail within it, add information such as EC weapons, health, models and roles.

ill be leaving a NEUTRAL as I believe you have potential.

I will also be leaving a NEUTRAL on this application from what I seen from you your Kind cool and was able to do a great job being ACO of shore

My Opinion is able to be changed  Good luck 

 

(Edit) Changing my vote to a +1 Due 2 me seeing that you have been taking peoples feedback and editing your application that right there shows how committed you are 2 this hope other people see you and notices this GL

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I like the event ideas they seem like they could work out well and be interesting. Seem like a nice bloke from what I seen of you as shore ACO.

 

Ima drop a +1 on this due to the fact that you’ve listened and made changes that people suggested. That shows dedication and the fact that you value what people say and have made the changes accordingly.

 

Good luck man, all the best.

 

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+1

Good guy, fun and trusted. He will be suitable for the position! Good luck on your application mate

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14 minutes ago, Wolffee said:

+1

Good guy, fun and trusted. He will be suitable for the position! Good luck on your application mate

Thanks mate! Means a lot

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You are clearly dedicated to wanting to better yourself as well as wanting to take on this position for what seems to be genuine reasons, however, after reading through your event documentations I am somewhat hesitant to support your application - That does not mean I am going to push back against your application, if anything consider this more neutral.

Here is some advise, first you should not be too dependent on numbers (ie. 'min 5') because sometimes you will not get numbers, which I understand sounds ridiculous but it occurs from time to time and to make your event only workable with a minimum you are only limiting yourself. Then you are stating the time you are aiming for, which is a double-sided blade, of course you want the event to go for a good amount of time but what is it? Is there a defined time, or is it when the majority of the server is getting over it, or is it when the story you are telling is over? This will change from time to time, but I typically put player enjoyment as number one with story afterwards. Finally, the health you have applied to the characters are interesting to me, typically when you have high health point individuals, you have only few of them but with five enemies all at two grand health points that will just cause annoyance with the players trying to kill them.

As for the story area - Look, whilst it may not be 100% applicable, I would like to point out that this area (at least in my opinion) is to simply see if you are able to actually string along a story and not just throw together an event with absolutely no depth. So what you put there, at least tells me that you are able to throw together a story and put a couple levels of depth (even though it's somewhat thin), which means you are able to improve and make it stronger.

All in all, you have good strengths and with some good work you will make an amazing event master. 

Good luck.

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On 1/29/2020 at 10:25 PM, Mongo said:

-1

Ideas are short and feel rushed, they could easily be more fleshed out and with proper planning

Application is short with short answers.

No idea who you are.

I suggest you take a look at some of the accepted applications to see what it takes to become an Event Master.

You should also take more time in detailing your application and event ideas. 

 

@CraigShore I will not be altering my response, it is completely against the  terms of applying to advertise your application in anyway shape or form, I have no doubt in my mind you are trying to dedicate yourself but this is not the way to go about it.

 

@Mongo how did i advertise?? the only thing i did was message you saying to take another look because i updated it... i didnt tell people to go look at it?

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