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The Crimson Tracer Part 2 (Backstory)(Shortstory)


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So Part 2 of the backstorys yay

took me a while...

Yeahhhh

 

I changed alot since i didnt like how i wrote the last one, ships were changed, and other things 

Remeber this Isnt 100% Lore friendly so dont @ me for anything like that 

looking at Aliystair and Kris

only kidding <3\

Feedback is also good. This is the second last of 3 backstorys before i get into the real fun 

-Delta 

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5 hours ago, Delta said:

looking at Aliystair and Kris

I don't know if I should be offended, or proceed to review your document and pluck every mistake. I opened it for 5 seconds and already spotted two.

 

:D

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30 minutes ago, TheNegotiator said:

I don't know if I should be offended, or proceed to review your document and pluck every mistake. I opened it for 5 seconds and already spotted two.

 

:D

Shush your face 

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