Delta 1,091 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 So Part 2 of the backstorys yay took me a while... Yeahhhh I changed alot since i didnt like how i wrote the last one, ships were changed, and other things Remeber this Isnt 100% Lore friendly so dont @ me for anything like that looking at Aliystair and Kris only kidding <3\ Feedback is also good. This is the second last of 3 backstorys before i get into the real fun -Delta Link to post Share on other sites
Mongo 612 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 the plot holes are weird you blacken out "battlestation" but you left deathstar in there several times. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Delta 1,091 Posted September 23, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 1 hour ago, Mongo said: the plot holes are weird you blacken out "battlestation" but you left deathstar in there several times. Ok I Fixed that part, any other problems? Link to post Share on other sites
Wombatiacus 790 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 Twas a good read, when I'm on my PC I will do up a proper response for you 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Crunchy 210 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 Very nice Delta, now that Imperial Gaming forums are turning into a library I can read while I aint doing anything. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Ragdig 63 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 And I thought I'd be bored on my trip. The more stories the better. This is yet another masterpiece made by the IG community. Cheers delta! Link to post Share on other sites
Vanilla 427 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 “The 20+ Astromechs, Pit droids, Mouse droids and a KNX Droid” Delta Flexed Lmao Link to post Share on other sites
TheNegotiator 93 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 (edited) 5 hours ago, Delta said: looking at Aliystair and Kris I don't know if I should be offended, or proceed to review your document and pluck every mistake. I opened it for 5 seconds and already spotted two. Edited September 23, 2019 by TheNegotiator 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Delta 1,091 Posted September 23, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 30 minutes ago, TheNegotiator said: I don't know if I should be offended, or proceed to review your document and pluck every mistake. I opened it for 5 seconds and already spotted two. Shush your face Link to post Share on other sites
Bailey 3,412 Posted September 23, 2019 Report Share Posted September 23, 2019 This kinda brazy. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Kamelieon 571 Posted September 24, 2019 Report Share Posted September 24, 2019 Nice work my Gucci friend Link to post Share on other sites
Corvo 72 Posted September 25, 2019 Report Share Posted September 25, 2019 "501st General Corvo" Link to post Share on other sites
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