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I decided to expand on the backstory of Lucky, I'm not the greatest writer but I think this is at least half decent. Any constructive criticism is always appriciated

 

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This honestly took me way longer to write than I would like to admit

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Updated to align with change of character
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For someone who isn't a "great writer" this  is actually some nice documentation

great read. although if you are a clone why are you so tall 

 

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That was a great read, shame I read it now instead of in the morning because it took 2 times as long as I wanted... I enjoyed it and the accuracy was awesome! Good Job CT-1313.

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Half decent he said, This is great!

Explanation of the early life, his missions, life changing experiences, everything that lead to his current post within the Empire. Good sh*t.

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A backstory doesn’t have to be stupidly extensive to be good, this is a perfect example of that. It explains your origins, your experiences on the server and gives everyone a little more insight into why General Lucky might act a certain way in RP. 

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6 hours ago, Lucky said:

Platform shoes ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Makes sense

Very Nice Work Lucky 

I Like it 

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8 hours ago, Lucky said:

This honestly took me way longer to write than I would like to admit

All of the ones I write take legit days, nah but, as long as your RP is being expanded on the the Server and you're enjoying yourself, it doesn't matter on the actual 'level' of the writing, I enjoyed it.

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