Sparx Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 (edited) Having re branded as Theseus instead of Sparx, and joining the 224th IAD, I thought a new backstory would be a nice idea https://docs.google.com/document/d/17JTFYj7Ait1mTzub8xhY8oZpIMaDQzCP8mUhxQH1Fak/edit?usp=sharing Constructive criticism is always appreciated and please inform me of any continuity/timeline issues Edited July 13, 2019 by Sparx Changed document to feature the ISB's document format Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mongo Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Job well done Sparx, amazingly well done and an interesting backstory. Good read. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamelieon Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Nice work! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgeBloon Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Awesome read! I like how it's a case file, very creative. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davenport Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 I love it, great job Theseus. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Very Interesting Sparx I cant wait to see the character Develop 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanilla Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Very cool 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bailey Posted July 10, 2019 Report Share Posted July 10, 2019 Case files are interesting to do in my opinion, I really like to see them compared to actual stories because they immerse you into what you may see in Star Wars. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wombatiacus Posted July 11, 2019 Report Share Posted July 11, 2019 I found this an interesting read when I looked over it before, this case file is very good and I can't wait to see your character develop over the course of time, it's well formatted and has little to no grammar mistakes. Well done 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparx Posted July 11, 2019 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2019 In keeping my responses to a minimum, thank you all for the responses, its rather nice to hear an overwhelmingly positive response to a piece of work I have written out of my own initiative, I shall continue to develop the story and work towards making the way I act in game reflect on the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ribbit Posted July 13, 2019 Report Share Posted July 13, 2019 Nice one sparx, I might want to be the other two at some point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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