Sparx 7 Report post Posted July 10 (edited) Having re branded as Theseus instead of Sparx, and joining the 224th IAD, I thought a new backstory would be a nice idea https://docs.google.com/document/d/17JTFYj7Ait1mTzub8xhY8oZpIMaDQzCP8mUhxQH1Fak/edit?usp=sharing Constructive criticism is always appreciated and please inform me of any continuity/timeline issues Edited Saturday at 03:05 PM by Sparx Changed document to feature the ISB's document format Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mongo 170 Report post Posted July 10 Job well done Sparx, amazingly well done and an interesting backstory. Good read. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kamelieon 202 Report post Posted July 10 Nice work! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GeorgeBloon 3 Report post Posted July 10 Awesome read! I like how it's a case file, very creative. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Davenport 3 Report post Posted July 10 I love it, great job Theseus. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Delta 515 Report post Posted July 10 Very Interesting Sparx I cant wait to see the character Develop 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanilla 240 Report post Posted July 10 Very cool 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bailey 1,741 Report post Posted July 10 Case files are interesting to do in my opinion, I really like to see them compared to actual stories because they immerse you into what you may see in Star Wars. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wombatiacus 553 Report post Posted July 11 I found this an interesting read when I looked over it before, this case file is very good and I can't wait to see your character develop over the course of time, it's well formatted and has little to no grammar mistakes. Well done 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sparx 7 Report post Posted July 11 In keeping my responses to a minimum, thank you all for the responses, its rather nice to hear an overwhelmingly positive response to a piece of work I have written out of my own initiative, I shall continue to develop the story and work towards making the way I act in game reflect on the story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ribbit 1 Report post Posted Saturday at 06:37 AM Nice one sparx, I might want to be the other two at some point. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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