Frosty__ 69 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 (edited) Steam Name: [IG] Frosty BoNuS pOiNtS SteamID32: 206284460 Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198166550188 In Game Name: 'Frosty' Time Played Imperial RP: 1 Week 6Day 19 Hours Time Played Imperial RP Evidence Time Played Clone Wars RP: I dont Play on Clone Wars Time Played Clone Wars RP Evidence Have you had any warns (If so state them)? Yes, I have 4 warns 3 of them were from a while ago when i came onto minge with a couple of friends well i played on a different server at that time. 1) Racism (Screaming racial slurs) My friend yelled AL-Ak-bAR and we all had the same name so we were all warned for it. Monday 22 January 2018 2) Attempted Mass RDM. Monday 22 January 2018 3) Pressing the hyperspace button. Monday 22 January 2018 4) Dc to Avoid arrest - I had to go to work so there wasn't much i could do about this one - This was on Fri April 19th 2019. Have you had any bans (If so state them)? I had a Perma Ban about 2 years ago. I can't remember what it was for Have you been staff on any other servers or communities (If so state them)? I was an admin on Mystic DarkRP servers until it shut down. It was a small community of about 20-30 players. I have been an EM on Raptor Gaming Why are you applying to be an Event Master? I want to show my dedication to this server and I want to make events that the community can enjoy and make the player want to come back for more, I want to help regiments with RP and give them more for them to feed off to make a more Engaging RP experience. I think i have a good understanding of what makes a "good" and "bad" event for the Imperial Community. I Believe i am a well-matured player within the community What do you believe you can bring to the Event Master team? I Have an imaginative mind and i am very into star wars lore so i think I could make some very unique events that would be interesting and immersive for the community well also being able to link all my events in some sort of timeline. I am also a fun guy to be around i think i would be a good fit for the EM team because i am a Fast Learner and i could bring some new interesting Event Ideas to the table. What do you believe you can do to make Events more fun, enjoyable and inclusive? If i became an EM i would link my Events in a way that is easy to follow but has a deeper story driving Path to them. if a soldier found a data pad or someone sliced into a terminal they would find information that would then be handed onto IHC and then in RP they would go to the planet in question and they would try to snuff out the enemy forces. I believe with a more structured style of events that lead from one to another it would help the RP of regiments and the RP on the servers in general. Do you have basic knowledge of ULX commands? Yes Anything else you would like to add? No. Thank you for reading my application. Have a wonderful Day Event Idea 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D0y5rS0M26-r2929dhvFtEqx1Sxbx7Sne3bpDY4z6Iw/edit?usp=sharing Event Idea 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I7DzEZo1Abxs0lanT36jg22j1Ug52DGm1mjZrjVuT68/edit?usp=sharing Terms & Conditions Yes Edited May 12, 2019 by Frosty__ Adding more information Link to post Share on other sites
Max 98 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 Just a few points I'd like to add: A bit more explanation is needed in the questions area. I'd like to see another event, rather than just a copy of one from another server (but it isn't a big deal to be honest) Your events are really good, well thought out and structured. If you could put when these warns happened, that would be great. This shows to me if you have grown in maturity, which is a big component of being an EM. Cheers. Link to post Share on other sites
Frosty__ 69 Posted May 12, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 1 hour ago, Max said: Just a few points I'd like to add: A bit more explanation is needed in the questions area. I'd like to see another event, rather than just a copy of one from another server (but it isn't a big deal to be honest) Your events are really good, well thought out and structured. If you could put when these warns happened, that would be great. This shows to me if you have grown in maturity, which is a big component of being an EM. Cheers. Just updated it. Link to post Share on other sites
Mongo 612 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 1 hour ago, Max said: Just a few points I'd like to add: A bit more explanation is needed in the questions area. I'd like to see another event, rather than just a copy of one from another server (but it isn't a big deal to be honest) Your events are really good, well thought out and structured. If you could put when these warns happened, that would be great. This shows to me if you have grown in maturity, which is a big component of being an EM. Cheers. -1 Events are detailed and well thought out. Although copying an event used for another server is just lazy and shows me that you lack the creativity to create a new one. Answers are lacking detail, making the application feel rushed Multiple Warns for various reasons and a Perm ban from the server. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Frosty__ 69 Posted May 12, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 (edited) 14 minutes ago, Mongo said: -1 Events are detailed and well thought out. Although copying an event used for another server is just lazy and shows me that you lack the creativity to create a new one. Answers are lacking detail, making the application feel rushed Multiple Warns for various reasons and a Perm ban from the server. What event did i copy? I made both of them, except for the Storyline one which a member of a different server named haz helped me write. The permaban was a long time ago and i have matured from that point. I have properly moved to IG and i want to help the community. I came on to minge a long time ago and i have matured since then. I take RP seriously on the imperial server and i also want to help within this community as much as i can. Edited May 12, 2019 by Frosty__ Link to post Share on other sites
Mongo 612 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 2 minutes ago, Frosty__ said: What event did i copy? I made both of them, except for the Storyline one which a member of a different server named haz helped me write. 2 minutes ago, Frosty__ said: Although copying an event used for another server "Used for another server" yes you made both of them. but you're reusing was my point anyway. Link to post Share on other sites
Frosty__ 69 Posted May 12, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 1 minute ago, Mongo said: "Used for another server" yes you made both of them. but you're reusing was my point anyway. Why would it matter if i reused an event? They were good events that have a good storyline you can follow it shouldn't matter when i made. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Lars 134 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 6 minutes ago, Frosty__ said: Why would it matter if i reused an event? They were good events that have a good storyline you can follow it shouldn't matter when i made. Look at it this way, someone who was denied for EM and reapplied would be expected to give new events in their new application - Similar principal here, we want to see your ability to make new events and not just rehash ones you made prior. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Frosty__ 69 Posted May 12, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 12 minutes ago, Sky said: Look at it this way, someone who was denied for EM and reapplied would be expected to give new events in their new application - Similar principal here, we want to see your ability to make new events and not just rehash ones you made prior. Okay, That makes more sense. Would you like me to add more Events to my App? Link to post Share on other sites
Lars 134 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 4 minutes ago, Frosty__ said: Okay, That makes more sense. Would you like me to add more Events to my App? Would be great to see more variety, feel free to do something you either have a passion for (IE. I am in love with Mandalorian lore, so I went that direction) or do something that you see as a challenge - Goodluck. Link to post Share on other sites
Sully 863 Posted May 12, 2019 Report Share Posted May 12, 2019 -1 Positives Past staffing/event master experience ULX command knowledge Negatives Application answers are rather generic and lacking in overall detail Applicant has 4 in-game warnings, 3 of which are old 1 of which is recent (http://bit.ly/30g1sT9) Applicant has 1 permanent server ban from 2018 for 'Alting, Advertising, No intent to RP, Minge and no sense of remorse to being banned (http://bit.ly/2Hfh0z6) The ban was not 2 years ago, as stated by the applicant Event examples are good however they have not been too thoroughly, things the event examples do not include; Alternate event pathways (taking into account possible actions the users could take which could sway the outcome of the overall event) Event character load outs & models Based on in-game interactions I do not believe you have the qualities of an event master at this stage, some areas I feel as if you could work on are; Activity Player engagement (becoming more known) Engaging in more heavy role play scenarios Increased maturity Constructive Feedback Fix your response to the question asking for your SteamID32, at the time of writing this response it is displaying your SteamID32 Here is your SteamID32 which you need to include in that section [ STEAM_0:0:103142230 ] For future reference you can type '!steamid NAME' in-game to locate your SteamID32 Adjust the section regarding your ban to state last year not 2 years ago as that would be incorrect The link provided in the negatives section shows the date of your ban adjustment being in late 2018 meaning your original ban was most like around the same time if not a little bit before (that statement could be incorrect however that is when your ban was extended to a permanent one due to further actions you took) Develop further on your pre-existing event ideas which are good and include work on fleshing it out more to include some of the points suggested above within the negatives section Develop further on your application answers in order to make your application stand out more and further convey why you want to acquire this position and how you becoming part of the Event Master team could benefit the players and the team. Work more to interact more with members of the community and engage yourself in as many RP situations and events as possible Good Luck, Sully Link to post Share on other sites
Frosty__ 69 Posted May 13, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2019 On 5/12/2019 at 8:34 PM, Sully said: -1 Positives Past staffing/event master experience ULX command knowledge Negatives Application answers are rather generic and lacking in overall detail Applicant has 4 in-game warnings, 3 of which are old 1 of which is recent (http://bit.ly/30g1sT9) Applicant has 1 permanent server ban from 2018 for 'Alting, Advertising, No intent to RP, Minge and no sense of remorse to being banned (http://bit.ly/2Hfh0z6) The ban was not 2 years ago, as stated by the applicant Event examples are good however they have not been too thoroughly, things the event examples do not include; Alternate event pathways (taking into account possible actions the users could take which could sway the outcome of the overall event) Event character load outs & models Based on in-game interactions I do not believe you have the qualities of an event master at this stage, some areas I feel as if you could work on are; Activity Player engagement (becoming more known) Engaging in more heavy role play scenarios Increased maturity Constructive Feedback Fix your response to the question asking for your SteamID32, at the time of writing this response it is displaying your SteamID32 Here is your SteamID32 which you need to include in that section [ STEAM_0:0:103142230 ] For future reference you can type '!steamid NAME' in-game to locate your SteamID32 Adjust the section regarding your ban to state last year not 2 years ago as that would be incorrect The link provided in the negatives section shows the date of your ban adjustment being in late 2018 meaning your original ban was most like around the same time if not a little bit before (that statement could be incorrect however that is when your ban was extended to a permanent one due to further actions you took) Develop further on your pre-existing event ideas which are good and include work on fleshing it out more to include some of the points suggested above within the negatives section Develop further on your application answers in order to make your application stand out more and further convey why you want to acquire this position and how you becoming part of the Event Master team could benefit the players and the team. Work more to interact more with members of the community and engage yourself in as many RP situations and events as possible Good Luck, Sully Thank you for the feed back. I am currently in the makes of a new event EP. It will take my about another day or so to make and once it is done i will be updating my app with your feed back. Thanks sully. Link to post Share on other sites
Rimmin 47 Posted May 14, 2019 Report Share Posted May 14, 2019 (edited) On 5/12/2019 at 3:24 PM, Frosty__ said: 1) Racism (Screaming racial slurs) My friend yelled AL-Ak-bAR and we all had the same name so we were all warned for it. Monday 22 January 2018 While my support lies on the negative side, I will say if you don't get accepted and decide to re-apply that you have a decent chance of getting in IF you work on the following; make your answers more "personalized", meaning instead of giving bland 4 lined paragraph that makes me feel as if im reading every other application, write something that tells me about you and the kind of EM that YOU are going to be. You should write new event ideas, as you stated, they are old documents. This gives you a chance to show people how dedicated you are to this role. It will also come in handy to boost your reputation within the community, you may want to do things like offer EMs help with events? Spoiler Now I want to address the above quote, what I believe you tried to spell was "Allāhu Akbar", which translates into “God is greater” or “God is the greatest”. So how it is a warnable offence is questionable, yes I understand your friend probably wasn't praising his god/s and it more plausible that he was repeating a phrase they understand to be spoken by a member of terrorist organizations following the religion of Islam. In modern days the association between the phrase and terrorism has become so apparent that the phrase is often best avoided. I personally just wanted to debunk this as I believe labelling this as racism or “screaming racial slurs” is so incorrect and wrong that it is considerably insulting. Edited May 14, 2019 by Rimmin Link to post Share on other sites
Advisor Rook 323 Posted May 22, 2019 Advisor Report Share Posted May 22, 2019 Hey! Thank you for applying to be an Imperial Event Master! Unfortunately, you have been unsuccessful in progressing to stage two of the application process, and your application has been denied.You are welcome to reapply in two weeks. Please contact me on the forums if you have any questions regarding this decision. - Rook Link to post Share on other sites
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