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Steam Name: Slurpee

Age: 16

Steam ID:76561198400377673

In Game Name and Rank: Janitor Slurpee

Time Played (Server Time): 1 week 3 days 12 hours

Have you had any warns and/or bans (If so state them): N/A

Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them): N/A

Why are you applying to be an event master: I want to help the other EM's make really interesting event's and also help the trooper's and other's have a good time during event's that they would like to participate in. And also for every one to just have a all round good time in general including the EM's. And help the community as much as i possibly can. Also the EM's iv'e seen so far are really nice people all round and deserve to be happy. I would love to get the oppurtunity to work with all the EM's and help the community out as well. If i made it into EM's i would put my 100% effort into helping the players in the server have a really good time with the other EM's as much as i can and hope the players like the events that i can give them.

What can you bring to the event master team: Team work, Laughs, Good time's, Positivity all round good times and hopefully i can bring some good vibes into EM's and some good teamwork as i think i am a very approachable person and i have heard so from others as well so i could bring some all round good times and vibes to EM's and if you needed any help i would try my best to help you out or if you get asked something and dont know by someone else i would try my best to help with that as well and hopefully get to know you all a lot more and do some cool events together and have some good time's.

What can you do to make events more enjoyable and innovative: I can team up with the other EM's and we can make the event's more interesting then they already are. Ask the community what kind of event they would like and go with the one everyone would like to play for that time. And hopefully the troops will choose a map or event idea to play if they dont i would contact another EM and get his/her opinion on both the event idea's and which ever one we both agree on we will go with and that's that.

Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands: A bit and i am willing to learn more if needed. And will do training to learn ULX commands to make events better than they already are so the troop's will hopefully enjoy my event's for a while.

Anything else you would like to add:I would love to get EM and start too know all of you more than i do now and help people have a good time. It would also mean so much to me to help IG out as a Em because Em's are so the core of IG without them we would have no action or fighting and other fun things like that i would love to help out on the server as a EM and i would contribute all the time and would love the chance to help the community.

 

Please fill out both event ideas and provide much detail as possible

Event Idea 1: Everyone goes MH1 for departure to another planet which we can organize if i make it into EM's and half way through debreif for the so called "event" a rebel drop ship fly's into MH1 and open's fire on the trooper's everyone protects IHC and escorts them out of MH1 to a secure location and then once everybody depart's MH1 the dropship lands in MH1 and rebel trooper's hop out of it and start attacking the troop's on the ISD looking for lucky or hammer really and IHC to hold captive for as long as they can and then another dropship lands with rebel droids in it and they hack the mainframe and turn off all the power that way engineer's have something else to do whilst everybody fight's then the rebels eventually die and the droids stay alive and lock the reactor room doors and all the troopers are trying to get in then the droids go out in a hole in the reactor room and patch it back up so no one knows where you went and a ship wide search eventually happen's and everyone goes around looking for the droids and the droids escape through a dropship in mh2 and then ties get deployed and they chase down the dropship whilst the engineer's are fixing the reactor and restoring power to the ISD then everyone gets debreif.


Event Idea 2: Everyone gets departed to Naboo and a small band of jedi attack the emperor's palace as a distraction for sith to leave the town if there in it and then some rebels take and civ's hostage and the troop's have to try and get them back then the rebels move to IHC and take the civ's there and all troop's eventually get them and arrest one they escort the rebel out of IHC and to the cave and a EM will spawn a monster inside the cave after interrogating the rebel and feed the rebel to the monster and then the monster breaks out and starts attacking every troop around and then it go's towards town whilst the sith and jedi are still fighting at the palace and the monster eventually die's and everyone go's back to the ISD and then a outbreak of monsters arise's and they walk about the ISD and all the troop's are trying there best to defend them selves as the monster's are singling them out one by one and everyone goes to tie bays as a last stand and the monsters all get sucked out to space because navy opened the tie bay doors as the monsters walked past while the troop's hid around a corner the navy quickly shut the tie bay door's so none of the troop's get sucked out and it stays defcon 3 for a while so the troop's can search the ISD for any remaining monster's and then eventually it goes back to defcon V and then everyone goes to debreif and gets reg placing's.

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1. You may bump your application every 7 days after the last bump/post (1 week)
2. Any user may provide feedback by +1 and or -1 your application
3. Advertising your application in OOC, chat box, personally telling people and any sort of social media will lead to your application deny
4. Failing to answer questions can lead to your app being denied
5. False information can lead to your application being denied
6. Failing to meet the requirements can lead to either your app being put on hold or denied
7. Must have more than 3 days on the server
8. To Clarify, you do NOT need to know the basic ULX commands however we prefer you learn before being accepted.
9. Asking for help from staff and/or past staff members will result in your application being denied, to avoid this you may look over accepted event apps to use as inspiration but not copied.

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I accept that I am a representative of Imperial Gaming, and that I have been given these powers to make the experience of others better. I understand that advertising my application can get it denied. I accept that I may be demoted at any time by a senior member of staff without prior warning, as long as a valid reason is given. I have read all the rules and understand them completely, if not I will ask a higher staff member for a better explanation.

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NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

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EDITED: Provided Full Breakdown

 

Hey @Slurpee1,

Thank you for taking the time to apply for the position of EVENT MASTER on the Imperial Gaming ImperialRP server. I have taken the time to view over your application and examine it for parts that I personally would deem good/needs work. I hope you take the time to view the comments I have left for the application breakdown and use them in order to further yourself and treat them as constructive criticism.

 

FULL APPLICATION BREAKDOWN:

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APPLICANT DETAILS

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PLAYTIME

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Time Played (Server Time): 1 week 3 days 12 hours

  • This section is good, it provides detail into how much time you have spent on the ImperialRP server which is well above the minimum playtime required to apply for this position (Minimum being 3 days).
  • Although the Event Master template doesn't explicitly ask for a screenshot to prove your playtime unlike many of the other application templates, providing a screenshot wouldn't be a bad idea. Not a major concern however due to it not being asked for within the template.

WARNS/BANS

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Have you had any warns and/or bans (If so state them): N/A

  • This is good, it shows you are a member of the community who manages to successfully uphold and stay within the confides of the rules. A quality which is important for any and all Event Masters to have.
  • Having a warn or ban (Depending on the nature of it) is not necessarily a bad thing it just means you would have to work that little bit harder to gain the trust of the Team you are joining (In this case the Event Master Team) as well as the members of the servers community.

 

 

APPLICANT HISTORY AND REASONS

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PRIOR EXPERIENCE

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Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them): N/A

  • This is a brief point, No prior event master experience is not a bad thing as everyone needs to start somewhere however it can prove useful when learning 'the tricks of the trade' as you will already be somewhat clued into how certain things operate.

REASON FOR APPLYING

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Why are you applying to be an event master: I want to help the other EM's make really interesting event's and also help the trooper's and other's have a good time during event's that they would like to participate in. And also for every one to just have a all round good time in general including the EM's. And help the community as much as i possibly can. Also the EM's iv'e seen so far are really nice people all round and deserve to be happy. I would love to get the oppurtunity to work with all the EM's and help the community out as well. If i made it into EM's i would put my 100% effort into helping the players in the server have a really good time with the other EM's as much as i can and hope the players like the events that i can give them.

  • Overall this is a reasonably good response that demonstrates and portrays your intentions behind wanting this role, yours in this case seem rather pure. It is good that you want to help to make events more interesting and wish to work with our already fabulous line-up of wonderful event masters. One thing I would like to address though is that you need to make yourself stand out more, every man and his dog who applies for this position uses the line 'I want to help make events more interesting and enjoyable' what can help make you stand out from other who apply is by giving examples on HOW you can make this happen. Run us through your train of thought, what this will do is when someone reads this application they will immediately go "WOW! this guy knows what he is talking about, and the stuff he is mentioning sounds like it could be great fun". Again this is not me saying what you listed was incorrect or wrong in anyway, it is just an example of how you can make your application stand out from the others.

WHAT CAN YOU BRING TO THE TEAM

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tWhat can you bring to the event master team: Team work, Laughs, Good time's, Positivity all round good times and hopefully i can bring some good vibes into EM's and some good teamwork as i think i am a very approachable person and i have heard so from others as well so i could bring some all round good times and vibes to EM's and if you needed any help i would try my best to help you out or if you get asked something and dont know by someone else i would try my best to help with that as well and hopefully get to know you all a lot more and do some cool events together and have some good time's.

  • Let me take a second to dissect this and grab out the things you say you can bring to the team
    • Teamwork
    • Laughs/Good times 
    • Positivity/Good Vibes
    • Approachable

Teamwork

  • Teamwork is important in a team enviroment such as the event master team, having the ability to mesh well with the rest of the team will highly benefit both the team as well as the server as it will allow for better and more entertaining events. This trait is a good asset for you to have.

Laughs/Good times

  • This is something that is also important to have, yes the server is a SeriousRP environment but having that ability to stand back and laugh whilst having a good time is priceless and is important in preventing you/others from burning out and not enjoying their time. Making others laugh during an event or just in general around the ISD is a trait that can boost the moral of the player-base as well as the EM team.

Positivity/Good Vibes

  • A positive outlook on things as well as a good vibe is a HIGHLY important trait to have as an EM. If users see you being a constantly angry/obnoxious or rude person do you think they will trust you with being an EM and possessing power over them? No, however if you have a good vibe and show a positive outlook on things people will feel more comfort in knowing you are there to help them and may even be excited to become one of your Event Characters.

Approachable

  • Approachability is KEY, allowing users to be comfortable in approaching you about issues they may have is a vital way of maintaining a well managed and organised enviroment. An example of where being approachable may help is if say a staff member was abusing their powers to abuse/belittle a user making their server experience miserable (Hypothetically speaking) and they did not feel comfortable putting in an admin ticket out of fear that that user would accept it and abuse them further, they may feel they are able to approach you to speak about the issue where you can then take it further and ensure the issue is resolved and the user feels more safe.

WHAT CAN YOU DO TO MAKE EVENTS BETTER

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What can you do to make events more enjoyable and innovative: I can team up with the other EM's and we can make the event's more interesting then they already are. Ask the community what kind of event they would like and go with the one everyone would like to play for that time. And hopefully the troops will choose a map or event idea to play if they dont i would contact another EM and get his/her opinion on both the event idea's and which ever one we both agree on we will go with and that's that.

  • This response is adequate however yes asking the community what kind of event they would like to do is a good idea however that does not neccessarily make an event better or more enjoyable, what does however is when the EM takes the time and put the effort into constructing an event that is fun, has a story, involves the masses (ie. involving every reg in something). Teaming up with other EM's is a good way to help run events so it is good that you have listed that above.

ULX COMMAND KNOWLEDGE

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Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands: A bit and i am willing to learn more if needed. And will do training to learn ULX commands to make events better than they already are so the troop's will hopefully enjoy my event's for a while.

  • This section similar to the Event Master experience section is not a major deal breaker, having that prior knowledge of the ULX commands and how they work is good however if you do not don't worry as if you are accepted into the EM position you will be trained and taught extensively on how to use them and set up proper ULX binds.

 

 

EVENT EXAMPLES

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EVENT 1

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Event Idea 1: Everyone goes MH1 for departure to another planet which we can organize if i make it into EM's and half way through debreif for the so called "event" a rebel drop ship fly's into MH1 and open's fire on the trooper's everyone protects IHC and escorts them out of MH1 to a secure location and then once everybody depart's MH1 the dropship lands in MH1 and rebel trooper's hop out of it and start attacking the troop's on the ISD looking for lucky or hammer really and IHC to hold captive for as long as they can and then another dropship lands with rebel droids in it and they hack the mainframe and turn off all the power that way engineer's have something else to do whilst everybody fight's then the rebels eventually die and the droids stay alive and lock the reactor room doors and all the troopers are trying to get in then the droids go out in a hole in the reactor room and patch it back up so no one knows where you went and a ship wide search eventually happen's and everyone goes around looking for the droids and the droids escape through a dropship in mh2 and then ties get deployed and they chase down the dropship whilst the engineer's are fixing the reactor and restoring power to the ISD then everyone gets debreif.

  • Event idea is bland, lacks originality and is well under planned/ thought out.

 

Things to include with your examples:

  • Charecters/Models
  • Map
  • Plot descriptions
  • Phases
  • Alternative Endings (Based on RP/actions that take place during the event)
  • More thought out/structured event ideas

 

Please when you have the time, view the previously accepted Event Master applications in order to gauge a greater understading on what I am talking about and how much detail/effort should be included.

 

Link: https://imperialgamingau.invisionzone.com/forum/108-accepted/

EVENT 2

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Event Idea 2: Everyone gets departed to Naboo and a small band of jedi attack the emperor's palace as a distraction for sith to leave the town if there in it and then some rebels take and civ's hostage and the troop's have to try and get them back then the rebels move to IHC and take the civ's there and all troop's eventually get them and arrest one they escort the rebel out of IHC and to the cave and a EM will spawn a monster inside the cave after interrogating the rebel and feed the rebel to the monster and then the monster breaks out and starts attacking every troop around and then it go's towards town whilst the sith and jedi are still fighting at the palace and the monster eventually die's and everyone go's back to the ISD and then a outbreak of monsters arise's and they walk about the ISD and all the troop's are trying there best to defend them selves as the monster's are singling them out one by one and everyone goes to tie bays as a last stand and the monsters all get sucked out to space because navy opened the tie bay doors as the monsters walked past while the troop's hid around a corner the navy quickly shut the tie bay door's so none of the troop's get sucked out and it stays defcon 3 for a while so the troop's can search the ISD for any remaining monster's and then eventually it goes back to defcon V and then everyone goes to debreif and gets reg placing's.

Same points as event 1

  • Event idea is bland, lacks originality and is well under planned/ thought out.

 

Things to include with your examples:

  • Charecters/Models
  • Map
  • Plot descriptions
  • Phases
  • Alternative Endings (Based on RP/actions that take place during the event)
  • More thought out/structured event ideas

 

Please when you have the time, view the previously accepted Event Master applications in order to gauge a greater understading on what I am talking about and how much detail/effort should be included.

 

Link: https://imperialgamingau.invisionzone.com/forum/108-accepted/

 

OVERALL APPLICATION

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Positives

  • Pure Intentions
  • Correct Playtime
  • No warns/Bans
  • No known issues of you as an individual

Negatives

  • Application Severally lacks detail
  • Time/effort put into this application appears to be low (based on the application as a whole)
  • Event Examples are not properly detailed and structured

 

(Breakdown has been condensed into a spoiler due to the size of the response)

 

In summary I do not personally see you being fit enough to hold the position of Event Master on the server due to the reasons listed above as well as the lack of time and effort that was put into the application, I thank you for applying for the role but at this point in time I will be leaving a  -1 on this application. Good luck with your future within the server and the community.

 

Sincerely,

Sully

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27 minutes ago, Slurpee1 said:

for 1 or 2?

 

Both. The 1st one is slightly bigger than the 2nd one but in my opinion needs more detail. I'd like to suggest looking in the Imperial RP Event Master accepted section and have a look at how much detail those people put in there Event Master application. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just trying to help you fix up your application so you could be accepted. Event Master accepted link: https://imperialgamingau.invisionzone.com/forum/108-accepted/.

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48 minutes ago, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

Willing to change to a +1 if detail is added.

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58 minutes ago, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

 

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3 hours ago, Sully said:

-1

 

• Application Has a poor amount of detail in both the responses and the event examples.

  - this shows that little time was put into the application and portrays the stigma that the applicant isn’t genuinely motivated to trying to achieve this role.

 

Points to improve

• formatting

• make it easier to read

• apply more detail to your responses and event examples, for an idea on how much detail should be added view some of the previously accepted applications.

 

(Will provide one of my full helpful application breakdowns once I get access to my computer)

You can do better.

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1 hour ago, Sully said:

-1

 

• Application Has a poor amount of detail in both the responses and the event examples.

  - this shows that little time was put into the application and portrays the stigma that the applicant isn’t genuinely motivated to trying to achieve this role.

 

Points to improve

• formatting

• make it easier to read

• apply more detail to your responses and event examples, for an idea on how much detail should be added view some of the previously accepted applications.

 

(Will provide one of my full helpful application breakdowns once I get access to my computer)

 

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2 hours ago, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

Gonna leave it at a -1 for now. Fix up the points and I'm more than happy to change my response

Good Luck!

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Sorry but Neutral leaning to -1

Seem alright in game 
Meet all in game requirements

Events as a whole need to be improved greatly
Unsure of if you would keep the position or if you are "Just trying it" as you have with regiments
Behaviour when confronted could be improved upon aswell.

 

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2 hours ago, Sully said:

-1

 

• Application Has a poor amount of detail in both the responses and the event examples.

  - this shows that little time was put into the application and portrays the stigma that the applicant isn’t genuinely motivated to trying to achieve this role.

 

Points to improve

• formatting

• make it easier to read

• apply more detail to your responses and event examples, for an idea on how much detail should be added view some of the previously accepted applications.

 

(Will provide one of my full helpful application breakdowns once I get access to my computer)

^ But Neutral

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2 hours ago, Sully said:

-1

 

• Application Has a poor amount of detail in both the responses and the event examples.

  - this shows that little time was put into the application and portrays the stigma that the applicant isn’t genuinely motivated to trying to achieve this role.

 

Points to improve

• formatting

• make it easier to read

• apply more detail to your responses and event examples, for an idea on how much detail should be added view some of the previously accepted applications.

 

(Will provide one of my full helpful application breakdowns once I get access to my computer)

 

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2 hours ago, Joel said:

Sorry but Neutral leaning to -1

Seem alright in game 
Meet all in game requirements

Events as a whole need to be improved greatly
Unsure of if you would keep the position or if you are "Just trying it" as you have with regiments
Behaviour when confronted could be improved upon aswell.

 

With the amount of times you've switched around in regiments, despite many times saying that you've found the dream regiment (212th, SCAR, Shore), I am unsure about your intentions of joining EM. Earn our trust that you can stay in a regiment without reg hopping, and you'll earn our trust for you to be an Event Master.

-1

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5 hours ago, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

 

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On 2/27/2019 at 11:26 AM, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

-1

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NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

 

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-1 for now. You have good intentions but I am yet to have many interactions with you in game. I do not know your level of maturity or how serious you can be in RP. If I come to know you more I am subject to change my opinion.

Good Luck!

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On 2/27/2019 at 8:26 AM, Wombatiacus said:

NEUTRAL A bit more detail can and should be added to both those event ideas. The questions also could use more detailed answers. You have no warns or bans and your playtime on the server meets the requirements. I personally have not had any problems with you in the past and don't expect to have any problems with you in-future. To sum it all up your event ideas need more detail. I am leaning towards a -1 only if you don't change some of the mistakes mentioned above.

 

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Thanks for applying!

I would like to say good luck before anything else! 
Sooooo with your application I can see one striking thing. 
There is a obvious lack of detail I'll try to hop onto Imperial to make a further verdict on you but from examining this application, I'm sorry but it's a -1 from me.

Please update your application and my -1 position will surely change! 

:D
-Mike

 

 

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Hey! Thank you for applying to be an Imperial Event Master!
Unfortunately, you have been unsuccessful in progressing to stage two of the application process, and your application has been denied.
You are welcome to reapply in two weeks. Please contact me on the forums if you have any questions regarding this decision.

- Rook

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