Mandor_Teth Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 (edited) Steam Name: [IG] remusdeath Age: 15 Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:423644309 In Game Name and Rank: VF "Mandor Teth" | Lieutenant Time Played (Server Time): 3weeks 3days Have you had any warns and/or bans (If so state them): no Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them): no Why are you applying to be an event master: As someone who likes to participate in events, I feel obligated to help the EMs where possible, I want to take the next step and organise events. And as a long time member and ever since the days of E L I T E, I have always wanted to create events that players will enjoy and I want to act on it instead of just dreaming. What can you bring to the event master team: I can bring a willingness to improve, learn and my creative thinking. I am always enthusiastic in what I do and can efficiently organise others as well. What can you do to make events more enjoyable and innovative: I want to introduce multiple endings in my events, giving players a choice on how they want it to end. for example, choosing between to people for a mining contract. Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands: No but I am a quick learner and believe I can pick it up quickly. Anything else you would like to add: No Event Idea 1: Two’s a Crowd Plot: A new valuable resource deposit has been found and two contractors want the contract to mine it for the Empire. Both at the same price but they have different ideas of what they want to do with the ore. one wants to use it to make vehicles and ships for the Empire, and the other wants them to make weapons. The players (officers of navy or gov) will hold a meeting to decide who gets the contract. Both have brought a small crew with them (4-5) and whoever fails to land the contract will order their crew to kill the other upon them leaving the ship. the players can then kill the hostile crew. Characters: Contractor_Corvyn Contractor_Fieris Crewman Coryn_1-5 Crewman Fieris_1-5 Equipment: DLT-19s and SE-14Cs for the Crewmen SE-14Cs for the contractors Raptors/Dropships Possible Endings (these are just predictions): Corbyn gets the contract: Fieris’ Contractor orders his crew to destroy the other contractor’s Ship or just kill him if that isn’t possible. Fieris gets the contract: Corbyn’s Contractor orders his crew to destroy the other contractor’s ship or just kill him if that isn’t possible. Neither get it: Both contractors order their crews to attack the empire and are most likely killed. Event Idea 2: The Invisible Men Plot: A cargo transport sends a distress signal asking for help as their oxygen is low. They state that they are transporting goods to an ISD Erandor when they were attacked by pirates and their O2 tanks were damaged. It’s all an elaborate trap and cloaked pirates are onboard. As the pilot attempts to distract and stall the imperials, the pirates sneak around the first floor stealing items from bunks. Unfortunately their cloaks are cheap and deactivate at random intervals for a couple seconds. If the imperials become suspicious or find cloaked pirates, the pirates will attempt to leave. But if the imperials don’t find them, they stay and move further into the ship. Characters: Pilot 4-6 Pirates Equipment: Cloaks for the pirates A320s for the pirates A Raptor/Dropships ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Terms of applying:1. You may bump your application every 7 days after the last bump/post (1 week)2. Any user may provide feedback by +1 and or -1 your application3. Advertising your application in OOC, chat box, personally telling people and any sort of social media will lead to your application deny4. Failing to answer questions can lead to your app being denied5. False information can lead to your application being denied6. Failing to meet the requirements can lead to either your app being put on hold or denied7. Must have more than 3 days on the server 8. To Clarify, you do NOT need to know the basic ULX commands however we prefer you learn before being accepted. 9. Asking for help from staff and/or past staff members will result in your application being denied, to avoid this you may look over accepted event apps to use as inspiration but not copied. Agreement:I accept that I am a representative of Imperial Gaming, and that I have been given these powers to make the experience of others better. I understand that advertising my application can get it denied. I accept that I may be demoted at any time by a senior member of staff without prior warning, as long as a valid reason is given. I have read all the rules and understand them completely, if not I will ask a higher staff member for a better explanation. Edited December 27, 2018 by Remus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoke Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 8 minutes ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke Completely Agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivers Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 16 minutes ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke Smoke sums it up well, you’re a good bloke and have potential but application is lacking detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wombatiacus Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 +1 due to some reasons stated above and how nicely written and formatted your application is, the amount of detail held within is really good but can always be added upon in future. I have had no problems with you in the past or now and you are a pretty good RP'er. Your event ideas a really good and would love to see them in action on the server in future if you do achieve the rank of Trial EM and further on. Good Luck and God Speed! - Wombatiacus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 Neutral. Reasons stated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Splonter Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 32 minutes ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rickle Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 38 minutes ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. Neutral, Reasons stated above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sully Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 (edited) 39 minutes ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke NEUTRAL,reasons as stated above Edited December 26, 2018 by Sully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 46 minutes ago, Wombatiacus said: +1 due to some reasons stated above and how nicely written and formatted your application is, the amount of detail held within is really good but can always be added upon in future. I have had no problems with you in the past or now and you are a pretty good RP'er. Your event ideas a really good and would love to see them in action on the server in future if you do achieve the rank of Trial EM and further on. Good Luck and God Speed! - Wombatiacus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shepard Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 1 hour ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke Neutral Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad_Cop Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 Pretty solidly neutral on this one you have some potential and have been around a while and while I've had some nice experiences with you I've also had bad such as you rushing in on me rescuing hostages then shooting me without asking what's happening. Which then caused the hostages death and my reeducation. Otherwise everything smoke said you seem to have a okay community reputation just need to demonstrate how you would be a EM. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuckyMikey Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 (edited) Neutral Ello mate, Thanks for applying but I'll have to give you a Neutral, though if things improve then expect a certain +1. So here are the main points Formatting is not good on the application (So to point out the gray striping on the app) it could just be me with a terrible mindset who knows Little Explanation : Put more detail in answers the current shape of it isn't good, Knowledge of ULX is lacking (This doesn't really matter it can be taught) Events seem fun and unique but lacks detail. Good Activity Very Mature If you improve on these factors then my opinion will too. Cheers -Mike Edited December 27, 2018 by LuckyMikey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mate Posted December 26, 2018 Share Posted December 26, 2018 2 hours ago, Smoke said: NEUTRAL (towards -1) I believe that there is some base layer here of a good EM, however there needs to be a lot more detail here in each question and in the events, I suggest looking at previous applications to see how much detail is put into each event and each question. If you fix these issues i may consider giving you a +1 or neutral leaning towards +1. I also believe that each event could be better structured with binds and /comms texts in the document so that it shows you have a competency in planning in advance. I would also like to see a greater overview of what each characters role in the event is and what HP they will be given. -Smoke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pavonis Posted December 27, 2018 Share Posted December 27, 2018 (edited) -1 -Application seems rushed -No detail in the events or in the application as a whole You can do better bud, Thanks, Pav Edited December 27, 2018 by Pavonis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wind Posted December 27, 2018 Share Posted December 27, 2018 +1 -Mandor is a very old member of the community and with this he would have seen many good events and many bad, with this information he could look at how they went well and how they went wrong and could make better events knowing this information -From Mandor being my commander and under my command i can assure anyone reading this that he is very responsible and would never abuse his powers in a negative way -Mandor is a very mature and focused person and would never loose control of the events he would run and would always make sure to keep them within RP and without going to overboard -Mandor's Event idea's seam simple but effective and would bring joy to all those whom participate -Mandor's application is missing details that would make it go that extra step Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigi Posted January 6, 2019 Share Posted January 6, 2019 Neutral Most reasons have been stated above. Would like to see a lot more detail put into your application, shows you're willing to work hard for the position. Opinion subject to change Good Luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retired Veteran Whitey Posted January 11, 2019 Retired Veteran Share Posted January 11, 2019 NOTICE: If you would like your application to be moved to CWRP then please send me a Private Message otherwise this will remain standing for Imperial RP Only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retired Veteran Rook Posted January 15, 2019 Retired Veteran Share Posted January 15, 2019 I actually don’t agree with everybody on this thread, and that’s because I’ve seen applications both good and bad produce both shit and good EMs. The kicker for me is that you seem to have both game knowledge and the ability to formulate your ideas into a way that makes sense. I would prefer to see you add more detail to your application, but I actually think you’d be a good addition to our team. +1 (P.S no formatting on phone) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramirez Posted January 15, 2019 Share Posted January 15, 2019 Hey Mandor, I really like you personally and I think you are the person for the role. But, upon reading this Application I am not sure that you actually want to be an Event Master. There is little to no detail displayed. Detail is important, it tells us who actually cares about becoming an Event Master by putting effort into their Application. Events are very important and they barely have any detail. We need to see a structure or the stages of your Event all planned out. Please fix this and I will happily change my response. NEUTRAL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helsing Posted January 16, 2019 Share Posted January 16, 2019 I’m going to give you a +1 It’s incredibly difficult to come up with events that nobody has thought of or done before to try and make your application stand out, and I don’t think enough people think about that. Your events seem innovative and I know you’re a mature dude, so I believe you could go a long way if given the chance. Good luck. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chubbs1 Posted January 16, 2019 Share Posted January 16, 2019 11 hours ago, Helsing said: I’m going to give you a +1 It’s incredibly difficult to come up with events that nobody has thought of or done before to try and make your application stand out, and I don’t think enough people think about that. Your events seem innovative and I know you’re a mature dude, so I believe you could go a long way if given the chance. Good luck. agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vevo Posted January 16, 2019 Share Posted January 16, 2019 Neutral Towards +1 You have planned your events with the items and characters well. You made many alternate endings for the first event which will be useful however events rarely go to plan which will make that pointless. more of a storyline would be required. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Posted January 17, 2019 Share Posted January 17, 2019 3 hours ago, Vevo said: Neutral Towards +1 You have planned your events with the items and characters well. You made many alternate endings for the first event which will be useful however events rarely go to plan which will make that pointless. more of a storyline would be required. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted January 17, 2019 Share Posted January 17, 2019 On 12/26/2018 at 6:50 PM, LuckyMikey said: Neutral Ello mate, Thanks for applying but I'll have to give you a Neutral, though if things improve then expect a certain +1. So here are the main points Formatting is not good on the application (So to point out the gray striping on the app) it could just be me with a terrible mindset who knows Little Explanation : Put more detail in answers the current shape of it isn't good, Knowledge of ULX is lacking (This doesn't really matter it can be taught) Events seem fun and unique but lacks detail. Good Activity Very Mature If you improve on these factors then my opinion will too. Cheers -Mike From the time I was in 501st, you seemed very mature and responsible, but like most people are saying, put a bit more info in. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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