Bailey Posted November 7, 2018 Report Share Posted November 7, 2018 I was told by many people they wanted a Wintoh backstory, and so here it is, it explains how we all ended up serving the Empire, as well as what we ended up doing after the War. It was written from a third person perspective originally, but then swaps to a first-person perspective near the end of the story. The story is an explanation into our lineage and is also meant to be read during the time of the New Republic, so anyone reading this, don't PK us, because I will be a sad boy. I will however, be retiring the name Bailey Wintoh upon leaving Shock, possibly PK'ing myself or going down the route set in this short story. I'll most likely be writing more in the future, because I like that delicious reputation that I get from it, as well as I like to give my characters a deeper story to abide by. So, here it is. Enjoy. The Wintoh Family 3 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted November 7, 2018 Report Share Posted November 7, 2018 When I say the title, I cringed a little. But since I’m in English, I had an idea... I gave your story to my English teacher for her to read over and give feedback. She hasn’t read it yet, but I’ll post another comment when she’s gives me the feedback. Good work again @Bailey 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan Posted November 7, 2018 Report Share Posted November 7, 2018 Oof @Basil 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bailey Posted November 7, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2018 17 minutes ago, Brass said: When I say the title, I cringed a little. But since I’m in English, I had an idea... I gave your story to my English teacher for her to read over and give feedback. She hasn’t read it yet, but I’ll post another comment when she’s gives me the feedback. Good work again @Bailey Thanks boss. I don’t really write them to be thrilling, just character context and something to kill my time. But that’d be appreciated, I don’t plan to be an author, just enjoy writing stuff for myself. if I ever do solo backstories they’re usually slightly longer than these ones, but I don’t feel like spending 9-10 hours on a story during exam season, maybe after they end I’ll write a longer one explaining why I have an ARF Helmet. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bailey Posted November 7, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2018 11 minutes ago, Morgan said: Oof @Basil Had to explain why he wasn’t in CS. The Chimaera Backstory explains the whole Deathtrooper part if you want to read that one as well. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retired Veteran Cecil Posted November 8, 2018 Retired Veteran Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 3 hours ago, Bailey said: because I like that delicious reputation that I get from it Rep farmer confirmed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rickle Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Great Story My Dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bailey Posted November 8, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 (edited) 21 minutes ago, Cecil said: Rep farmer confirmed The reputation points are a bi-product of me writing these stories. Can’t say I don’t like them tho. Edited November 8, 2018 by Bailey 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wombatiacus Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 39 minutes ago, Bailey said: The reputation points are a bi-product of me writing these stories. Can’t say I don’t like them tho. Lol I gave you all the reputation I can give you today. <3 Also I have showed my teacher this and the first thing she said was “Why can’t you write like this?” after that I was dying in the inside. She also said it was amazing amd that she doesn’t understand Star Wars so I sat there for the entire lesson explain Star Wars lore like this to her. She still doesn’t understand the places or the event’s of it... besides that I loved it! Enjoy the rep I gave you <3 - Wombatiacus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camaro Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 (edited) Had a chuckle while reading this, cheers. Edited November 8, 2018 by Camaro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivers Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 God damn this is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bosterflaming Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 This is pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 6 hours ago, Morgan said: Oof @Basil Oof I missed out by 1 (story soon) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashy Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 42 minutes ago, Delta said: Oof I missed out by 1 (story soon) R.I.P Delta, although amazing story Bailey 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corvo Posted November 13, 2018 Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 @Bailey I did enjoy my solid week of time in your family :) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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