Piano 1 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) Steam Details Steam Name: [IG] Piano Steam ID:76561198081109334 Steam Profile link:https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198081109334/ In Game Details In Game Name: ARC-23-B Piano In Game Rank: Warrent officer 2 In Game Regiment: Rancor Battalion Time Played (Server Time/ Must Provide Screenshot evidence): PAC3 Questions Have you used PAC Before: I've been messing around with it recently but before this app, no I haven't Why should you be trusted with PAC (1 Paragraph): I believe I should be trusted with PAC3 because, I'm a loyal and trusting trooper, I take RP seriously and I don't minge, i'm also very active on the server and I like this server. I have endeared many other SWRP servers and have over 2250 hours on the game, I understand the rights of human decency and try to uphold my status as a good person, I will always accept a mistake if it is mine and won't peg it on someone else for self gain. I've always focused on the benefits of the group and not my self, and I will continue to do so with or without PAC. Why do you want access to PAC (1 Paragraph): I would like access to PAC 3 because, I like the creative touch and freedom it grants, I also like the seriousness that it make, look the part act the part. I also believe that others who see it will do the same, or like I was, be inspired to stay on the server so they could also get PAC. PAC is one of the best way to do RP which will help me in ether events or ship occurrences, which I believe will heighten the level the server stands on, and with time improve content. Why do you believe you deserve PAC (1 Paragraph):I believe I deserve PAC3 tier 1 because I've been very loyal to the server and have contributed a lot of time to it, I've also stuck to my regiment. I'm always friendly to other players and made sure to stick out of trouble with shock or admins, and never abused my position. I've helped countless amounts of people and I take care of my regiment to the best of my ability. I have been working tirelessly to help the server, for what it count and never stopped to focus on solely my self, until now where i'm simply asking for PAC3 access. In short I would like PAC to give back to the server for its experiences, I feel it is about time that I started to help it improve and PAC3 will help me do just that. PAC3 Examples: New model, Thermal dets, pouches, extra guns and ammo, backpack with holographic imergry, visor and tactical neck scarf. PS: I'm not sure if the player model i used was someones custom on the server, it can be changed, so tell me in the comments Edited August 28, 2018 by Piano Hopefully this changes some of the votes, ? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
|Stryker| 151 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) +1 Known Piano for 2 years, Hes my long lost brother and is Deserving of PAC. Hes very responsible and would do great things. Edited August 28, 2018 by |Stryker| Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Piano 1 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 Sorry about the random image at the bottom i didn't know it was there until i posted, SOZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Galle 60 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) -1 It looks like you understand pac3 but you have put little detail in the questions I can change my -1 to a +1 if you put more detail in the questions +1 Edited August 28, 2018 by Galle Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emerald 0 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 1 minute ago, Galle said: -1 It looks like you understand pac3 but you have put little detail in the questions I can change my -1 to a +1 if you put more detail in the questions Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wombatiacus 603 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 I'm going to go with NEUTRAL for now until I see a little more detail added to that application of yours. I can change my NEUTRAL to a +1 in future if you add some more detail. Love the PAC's btw and Good luck! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bevan 107 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) 10 hours ago, Galle said: -1 It looks like you understand pac3 but you have put little detail in the questions I can change my -1 to a +1 if you put more detail in the questions Changing to +1 as you have improved the application greatly Edited August 28, 2018 by Bevan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Helsing 264 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 NEUTRAL - Good PAC3 creations - Very minimal detail in answers to questions Good Luck! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Piano 1 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 cheers guy that for the feedback, just wondering if i have to wait until this APP is accepted or decline before changing it or can i take it down then change it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Twinkie 278 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 Now a glorified forums warrior I'll try my best to critique this application fairly First of all, to the eye, your application is very poorly detailed. As the questions state 1 paragraph, it is expected at least 3 sentences, which for me is an average paragraph. In your answers, you only use comma's to join your words together, and I believe that you could elaborate a lot more upon your answers, as what you have said is good but you need to explain it more. Have a look at some other applications to see the standard of writing you need to meet before meeting people's expectations. I have also seen basic spelling mistakes that are easily fixable, so try and run it through something like Grammarly to help you fix up your answers. Other than the writing part of your application, it looks good. You have enough time, a solid RP rank to use PAC, a roleplay rank that actually makes sense to have Pac, and your examples are quite nice to look at. Yes, people may argue that it is basic, "It doesn't have bonemerge!", "He doesn't edit the bones", "It's not cool!". Although these points may be valid to some people, your examples actually make sense and are very appealing to the naked eye. You obviously know what you are doing, and as you said you are not sure if it is someone's custom model, that model is the VF Commander model. If you can show that you are dedicated and loyal to the server, I can see great things coming. Positive Support 7 minutes ago, Piano said: cheers guy that for the feedback, just wondering if i have to wait until this APP is accepted or decline before changing it or can i take it down then change it? You can edit it while it is still up, so you don't have to take it down when you want to change it. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pluto 55 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 6 minutes ago, Piano said: cheers guy that for the feedback, just wondering if i have to wait until this APP is accepted or decline before changing it or can i take it down then change it? There should be an edit button near the bottom left of your post to make changes to the application and add or remove things. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emerald 0 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 8 minutes ago, Piano said: cheers guy that for the feedback, just wondering if i have to wait until this APP is accepted or decline before changing it or can i take it down then change it? You can edit the application whenever you want. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kamelieon 219 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) +1 Edited August 28, 2018 by EpicEzale Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emerald 0 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 Changing to +1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rickle 501 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 +1 Goodluck -Rickle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lucifer 23 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 1 hour ago, Twinkie said: Now a glorified forums warrior I'll try my best to critique this application fairly First of all, to the eye, your application is very poorly detailed. As the questions state 1 paragraph, it is expected at least 3 sentences, which for me is an average paragraph. In your answers, you only use comma's to join your words together, and I believe that you could elaborate a lot more upon your answers, as what you have said is good but you need to explain it more. Have a look at some other applications to see the standard of writing you need to meet before meeting people's expectations. I have also seen basic spelling mistakes that are easily fixable, so try and run it through something like Grammarly to help you fix up your answers. Other than the writing part of your application, it looks good. You have enough time, a solid RP rank to use PAC, a roleplay rank that actually makes sense to have Pac, and your examples are quite nice to look at. Yes, people may argue that it is basic, "It doesn't have bonemerge!", "He doesn't edit the bones", "It's not cool!". Although these points may be valid to some people, your examples actually make sense and are very appealing to the naked eye. You obviously know what you are doing, and as you said you are not sure if it is someone's custom model, that model is the VF Commander model. If you can show that you are dedicated and loyal to the server, I can see great things coming. Positive Support You can edit it while it is still up, so you don't have to take it down when you want to change it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pinejack 618 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 +1 only thing is that the blue model you have chosen is the Vader's Fist Commander model Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Crunchy 157 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 +1 looks sick man and great detail good luck my dude Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Peguin 73 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) Ok, you are using the Vaders Fist commander model for PAC (thought I might tell you). My tier 1 application had roughly 1000 words (I checked). Now Im not saying have that many but a bit more detail is required for an application. There's 2 parts, the application and the PACs you make. Neutral. Edited August 28, 2018 by Peguin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fox 327 Report post Posted August 28, 2018 +1 Nice app and good PACs for tier 1 goodluck Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gregis 209 Report post Posted August 29, 2018 +1, Nice pac's, nice bit of detail on the responses Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gadeszy 7 Report post Posted August 30, 2018 (edited) +1 - Great Guy - Good at PAC - Valid Reasons for PAC Edited August 30, 2018 by Gadeszy Changing Text Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jalex 52 Report post Posted August 30, 2018 On 8/28/2018 at 10:57 PM, Helsing said: NEUTRAL - Good PAC3 creations - Very minimal detail in answers to questions Good luck, Jalex Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Piano 1 Report post Posted September 4, 2018 **Bump** Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Veles 91 Report post Posted September 10, 2018 +1 nice application Pacs are nice Try updating all the information so its 100% correct Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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