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Steam Name:
The Covert Lynx

Age:
15

Do you have a microphone that you can use regularly?
Yep.

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:0:84451898 (If needed: http://steamcommunity.com/id/thecovertlynx/)

In-game name and rank:
SW Lieutenant Lynx

Time Played:
1 Week

Why are you applying for this position?:
I am applying for this position because I believe that I can contribute more to IG and the RP experience by providing for others interesting, deep throughout and fun events. Personally I also believe that this will allow me to establish connections with wider range of people within the community so that I can involve different people to have the same experience that others have.

How will allowing you to be apart of our staff team help us?:
By allowing me to become part of the IG staff, I would provide an extra pair of helping hands to staff, while also contributing towards the betterment and improvement of events by combining both previous experience from current Event Masters, with my ideas to create a fantastic RP experience.

Have you been an Event Master on previous servers? If so please list them:
No. I previously haven't been an Event Master however with I have participated in many events and know how the gist of it goes.

Have you had any warnings, kicks or bans if so please list them:
Nope.

What can you do to make events more enjoyable and attract more people?:
I believe the two key things for an event to work is participation and fun. As an Event Master, my intention is that I will try to include as many as I can, that wish to partake in my events. Members being attracted to events means that there is a really solid core story to the event, as well as being given the freedom to explore and analyse the map to give the full RP experience. These are both things that I am able to incorporate and by doing so will increase enjoyment of the event.

Anything else you would like to add:
Although I haven't been an Event Master before I am familiar with both the GMOD console and add ons that IG SWRP has available so would be able to use the full extent of those to make the event entertaining.

Two different example events that you will do if you get accepted for the position of Event Master:

Event One - Arctic Assault

Location: Hoth (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=896338025&searchtext=hoth)

  • Event Preparations (In Base): I will gather between 4-8 event characters and describe their roles and key details about the event.

  • Ahead of Mission Briefing: The Navy successfully in intercepts a transmission from the rebel forces from the rebel base on Hoth to Rebel Command on Yavin Four. This transmission states that the they require immediate support due to the supply run that the previously sent did not arrive.

  • While in Briefing: The Navy has deciphered a coded transmission from the rebel scum on the remote planet of Hoth. They claim that they are low on supplies and ammunition. The Emperor has highlighted the point this is an imperative time to strike them down while they are unequipped from an attack. So our mission is to capture this base on Hoth so that the Imperial forces have a strategic location in the Outer Rim. Snowtroopers have the most experience in a climate such as this so if you have any urgent questions before we depart I suggest you ask them on the way to the Landing Pads. (Extra snowtroopers will take form in event characters, and will be changed to this regiment, while also the best RP character in the event takes command of it.) Good luck, and long live the Empire! Dismissed!

  • Event Preparations (On Planet): The spawn will be set on the other side of the map and a TV will be provided. All event characters will be taken to Echo Base where they will be set up for their roles.

  • On Hoth (Trooper Objective): When the event is ready to commence, I will divide the troopers into three squads (Ada, Bantha & Clanker) in which will all have a snow trooper in command. Initially the squads will divide up to scan the terrain and alert in COMMS if they find anything e.g. that maybe rebel propaganda or unauthorised weapons. Ada Squad heads towards the left of the spawn, Bantha heads straight towards the compound and Clanker heads to the right. Bantha squad eventually gets overwhelmed and asks for immediate support after being flanked from behind. The other two squads then come for back up as they head towards the direction of Echo Base met with large amounts of rebel opposition. They take many casualties on as they advance so hold their position. At this time they are about ¾ away from the base, two rebel T-47 airspeeders attack them piloted by event characters, forcing them to find cover and shoot them down. Troopers have trouble shooting the ships however they eventually blow up. Once destroyed the troopers then continue in the same direction and soon discover the rebel stronghold. As they enter the base from the right door which is open, again met with opposition and the rest of event characters come into play who ambush most from behind as the left door opens. The troopers eventually are able to deplete their defence and storm the Echo Base. Troopers go door to door to try to find the rebel headquarters. Eventually they find the room in which they find the Echo Base General, guarded by two Rebel Honour Guards who try to protect the general. The battle is short but many troopers die against the rebel guards. Once killed Shock troopers detain the General and escorts him outside. At this point the rebels overwhelm the troopers forcing them to retreat back to the LZ. As the troopers start to leave more rebels appear wanting to free the General. The main objective now is to protect the General on approach to the landing zone.

  • On Hoth (Lightsabre Wielder Objective): While troopers are entering the base: One/Two depending of the number of LWs Jedi Starfighters are detected by the Navy entering the atmosphere in which the LWs are diverted to behind the base. These Jedi fight the LWs either to their death or if they win assist with the freedom of the rebel General. Once the Jedi has been defeated the LWs regroup with the rest of the troopers for departure.

  • On Departure: The Navy then request for pilots and crew members to get into their dropships, while also requesting that Echo Base be targeted not wanting the rebels to keep control for Orbital Bombardment to the Star Destroyer above. All personnel get into their ships and depart for the Rishi Moon Outpost.

  • While in Debrief: It was unfortunate the Imperial Army could not capture the base on Hoth however not wanting to fall into rebel hands a decision was made to cal and orbital bombardment which destroyed the base. Our major success was that we have were able to capture the Rebel General in which the ISB will be able to extract information from him in the Brig. The information from him could prove to be useful and you are all to be commended on that. Regimental Placings and Other Comments/Notes. Dismissed!

EXTRA INFO: Would it be possible/Have we got a model along the lines of this for the event? http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=900852101 (Used for Hoth Rebels)

 

Event Two - Fueling the Empire

Location: Atollon (https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=554556189)

  • Event Preparations (In Base): I will gather between 4-8 event characters and describe their roles and key details about the event.

  • Ahead of Mission Briefing: An agent from the ISB returns from an undercover mission on Atollon in which he is able to discover that there was a brigade of republic clones that disobeyed the Empire. He is brought into the Conference Room for a debrief of senior ISB and Navy officers. Once the details have been determined, there will be a call sent out for a briefing.

  • While in Briefing: A scouting informant of the ISB returned earlier today from the planet of Atollon. He claims that a brigade of republic clones that disobeyed the Empire have set up a base there. This is a strategic location as the planet is rich with Rhydonium fuel which is used to power our all-conquering Star Destroyers. As it happens the Empire is in need of this fuel making this an imperative command from the Emperor himself that we are able to capture this base and secure the resource so that we can keep our ships roaming across the galaxy. Be warned that the terrain on this planet is very treacherous and potentially could have third party hostiles involved. Make your way to the landing pads. Good luck, and long live the Empire! Dismissed!

  • Event Preparations (On Planet): The spawn will be set on the other side of the map and a TV will be provided. All event characters will be taken to the Republic Base where they will be set up for their roles.

  • On Atollon (Trooper Objective): When the event is ready to commence, as a whole force we will move towards their republic base in the North. As troopers approach the base they are ambushed not clones but by Tusken Raiders. We take heavy losses however are able to eventually fight them off. While continuing further towards the base multiple landmines go off, injuring many other troopers. This illustrates that the clones have prepared for an attack. Deciding that the route is no longer secure, we decide to flank the clones by going around their base and attacking them from behind. This plan proves to be a lengthy but in our eyes necessary tactic. Close to the base, we find that no clones are on guard in the base. Troopers are posted to protect the outer perimeter in case of a Tusken attack. In the base we find two Tusken bodies in one of the outer warehouses of the base. A sudden noise is heard. (Bomb alert sound then explodes.) The ISB informant had tricked the Empire. An 'Arrest On Site' order is placed on this informant and when attempting to flee, is captured. At this moment a Republic Cruiser comes into our atmosphere along with a brigade of clones. The mission now is to defend the base at all costs. The clones eventually surround the base cornering the troopers, while Navy send out a desperate call to the Star Destroyer to send immediate help. 5 minutes later the Star Destroyer comes into the atmosphere as well and providing cover fire and support. At this point all of the clones have been overwhelmed so they retreated towards their drop ships, escape then the clone cruiser jumps into hyperspace and flees. The troopers have now completed their mission orders are received to head back to the (with the ISB informant) LZ carrying three canisters of Rhydonium from the base.

  • On Atollon (Lightsabre Wielder Objective): One/Two depending of the number of LWs Jedi are spotted by Scouts behind the base. These Jedi are rumoured to be the ones that the clones spared when they disobeyed Order 66 and are friends with. These Jedi fight the LWs either to their death or if they win assist with the freedom of the rebel General. Once the Jedi has been defeated the LWs regroup with the rest of the troopers for departure or help the troopers fighting the clones.

  • On Departure: The Navy then request for pilots and crew members to get into their drop ships, while also requesting that the Stormtroopers and Shock stay to insure the safe departure of the Dropships. All personnel get into their ships and depart for the Rishi Moon Outpost.

  • Before Debrief: Shock places the ISB informant against a wall of C-Block. The troopers are then ordered to line in a firing line towards the informant, safety on. "AIM" (Off Safety). "FIRE" (Fire Blasters).

  • While in Debrief: Our mission to Atollon was a success and the Emperor has wished that I commend every trooper that was involved. Even although the ISB informant tried to trick the Empire he has been disposed of while we have gained a new supply of Rhydonium, which will ensure that the Empire remains all-powerful and mighty. The ‘Accuser’ Star Destroyer will remain on that planet along with its forces to continue to utilise the planet. Regimental Placings and Other Comments/Notes. Dismissed!

EXTRA INFO: Would it be possible/Have we got models along the lines of this for the event? https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=878090416, http://steamcommunity.com/workshop/filedetails/?id=878092659 and https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=141558570 (Can be used for other events.)

Thank you for reading and considering my EM application!

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The DEATH RESPONSE

pls do not witch hunt me if this insulted your feelings. Hide in a closet if you cant take critism.

+1 After several replies from Lynx, he has proven to me he is determined for Event staff, he did his best to reply to all my criteria. 

Q1. Grammar issues are already found. "Others Interesting, deep throughout and fun events"

2 sentences, fk me

You believe that you can make interesting and fun events. You also believe it would give you a better reputation. Wait, for the last part, are you trying to say that you'll give each other the same experience? Wtf does that mean?How? Elaborate!!!!! 

[This is a guess example of what I think youre thinking]

evidence: For every event i will choose a regiment from a list ( a to z ) to play as event characters. The next day ill enroll the next regiment on the list.

And for your last sentence( your secnd) you talk about your reputation growing and you'll make people have the same gaming experience without telling me how you can bring in this new technique you made! 

2/5 ( It's a two sentence paragraph with only 3 brief reasons)

Q2 You will give helping hands by discussing events development. You will combine the previous experiences of event masters? Wtf does that mean? You'll use their previous events into 1 cluster fk? What does previous experience mean?! 

I'm beginning to feel you have no idea wtf youre saying or you hace no idea how to pull off your statments.

Q5 Partcipating and Fun. Fun as in you'll make the events more funner? Because thats what the question is asking you how to do it, and you say it's your second main factor.

You'll have more people playing as characters during the events. Good idea, 4/5 for creativity, somehow i haven't come across this simple idea in other applications. 

Giving the player the ability to roam and do they thing. I do that all the time, nothing new. Just having a aos or kos event usually involves free roaming, and I dont enjoy these events. Oh and saying events are only good because they have a good story isn't always true. 

EVENT 1

PLEASE TAKE THE TIME TO FKEN CHECK YOUR PUNCTUATION, I CANT UNDERSTAND ANYTHING!

Preperation. You say that you will have more people acting in the event, but there is 4-8, a usual number of event characters. 

Wow thanks for telling me their roles and keys in the beginning, now i have to check wtf their roles and keys are in the text.

Beginning of the event, so far boring and cliche as fuck. Navy hack wifi password and check rebel search history, now thats funny.

wait, is this a fken script? Fk me....!! This is from a characters point of view. He narrates what is happening during the briefing in past tence, then he switches to dialogue, where he is asking people to ask snow troopers on how to survive in the snow?!?! Wtf 

Why are you just freely recruiting people in the snow troopers? That's just stupid. Youre forcing people to play as snow troopers so that they can become the most seen regiment. Although it is a promotion, but the only people i'd recruit are st's. I wouldnt want to briefly leave my regiment to join a snow version of st.

No dividing the Imperial army. There would be a knight to stand up and demand he'll be the leader, and people will bitch on whose the leader. You cant expect events with high detail in low stakes parts to exactly be perfect. There will be people who split up and do their own things. Leading regimental commanders would complain about how their troops are forced to work wth other regiments. Especially with a snow trooper in command, just because they know how to the lyrics to frozen. 

Worst of all when splitting regiments, the split groups would have differnet types of experience. GROUP a might verse aliens, Group b would verse rebels and group c would capture someone. 

I didnt find anything about the troopers reuniting, if you find it please correct me.

You can easily gun down a ship with 60troops. It'd be hard to avoid the shots.

I swear, if you think the rebel guards would last against the sith and several troopers, youre fucked. 

They are then jumped on by more rebels and Jedi. Somehow Jedi suddenly appear, instead of helping in the base. Did they wait because they just arrived? Why would the Jedi had left the base? Did they know that they were going to be attacked? Did the Jedi hyperspace to Hoth?! Wouldnt the Navy just detect it, making the troopers and sith prepared. Why didnt the star destroyer gun the rebel transport ship coming into Hoth?

Ok I just read the Hoth lore. YES There was a Echo base, but it was overun by the empire, not blown to bits. I can tell you checked the Hoth briefly but you just modified the lore, making yourself look like it is a decent event. Oh and Luke was in the alliance fighting back against the Imperials. If you didn't realise Krennic died before Luke joined the war.

Your event is just basically a deformed and modified version of the actual lore. 

Too lazy to do Event 2. It's 12:58am

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Right OK - Bearmax I will unpack the first part of my feedback from you so we can be on the same page here. THIS IS GOING TO BE A BIG POST.

5 hours ago, Bearmax said:

-1 Plagerism, unlore friendly and you basically just wrote the story of the Battle of Hoth but altered. 

  • OK so 'Plagiarism' (is the "wrongful appropriation" and "stealing and publication" of another author's "language, thoughts, ideas, or expressions" and the representation of them as one's own original work,) in which I appreciate that the Battle of Hoth was created by George Lucas and his studios, however this was not a 'carbon copy' recreation of the Hoth battle. In my event there are no AT-ATs, no Hoth Dish Turrets or Hoth Defence Turrets. In that said though, I do admit that I used 'Echo Base' as a reference but the end result of Echo Base in 'this case' was its destruction at the end of the event making it like an 'alternate ending'. So if it is not plagiarism of lore, it is bound to be unlore friendly. Is it not? 
6 hours ago, Bearmax said:

Q1. Grammar issues are already found. "Others Interesting, deep throughout and fun events"

2 sentences, fk me

You believe that you can make interesting and fun events. You also believe it would give you a better reputation. Wait, for the last part, are you trying to say that you'll give each other the same experience? Wtf does that mean?How? Elaborate!!!!! 

  • The description of 'Why I am applying' in the specific part of where you quoted me is called 'Triadic Structure' that is why it is not in two separate sentences. 
  • Yes I do believe I can make events interesting and fun. I said that it will increase the amount of connections I have within the community, NOT move higher in the 'ranks' and have a cooler 'tag' in the Member list on the server.
  • For the last part - Changing up the people who 'often' (loosely used) participate to encourage other who are perhaps new to the server or 'older' (also used loosely) who might want to participate in them again - So that everyone gets a chance! How? Well I will know which people will be in the events so will give others a chance before I consider them joining again. ONLY EXCEPTION TO THIS IS: If the event is a 'link' (join) to the next one most of the characters will stay the same.
6 hours ago, Bearmax said:

evidence: For every event i will choose a regiment from a list ( a to z ) to play as event characters. The next day ill enroll the next regiment on the list.

And for your last sentence( your secnd) you talk about your reputation growing and you'll make people have the same gaming experience without telling me how you can bring in this new technique you made! 

2/5 ( It's a two sentence paragraph with only 3 brief reasons)

  • No - It is not my intention for every regiment to have a specific event for them (although possibly could happen every 5-6 events - If that is what the collective EMs decide) but it is not exclusively for that regiment - More like what this regiment has to offer in the 'heat of battle' and in 'their' type of environment.
  • Commented this above (Reputation idea) ^^^
  • That's right - 'Short, Sharp and Sweet'
6 hours ago, Bearmax said:


Q2 You will give helping hands by discussing events development. You will combine the previous experiences of event masters? Wtf does that mean? You'll use their previous events into 1 cluster fk? What does previous experience mean?! 

I'm beginning to feel you have no idea wtf youre saying or you hace no idea how to pull off your statments.
 

  • It means that events that current EM might like to have help in forming ideas for events and I am willing to present my ideas to them, together piecing 'bit by bit' an event. OK?
  • My previous experience in events means that I have both been on the Imperial (trooper) perspective many times while also been in events, against the Empire (event perspective). Pretty much what I said earlier!!! 
  • (If you would like me to) I can keep reinforcing all you like that I can pull off my ideas and statements.
  • P.S. Don't judge my grammar and punctuation, if you can't even be bothered to spell correctly when commenting. Just a heads up.:/ 
6 hours ago, Bearmax said:


Q5 Partcipating and Fun. Fun as in you'll make the events more funner? Because thats what the question is asking you how to do it, and you say it's your second main factor.

You'll have more people playing as characters during the events. Good idea, 4/5 for creativity, somehow i haven't come across this simple idea in other applications. 

Giving the player the ability to roam and do they thing. I do that all the time, nothing new. Just having a aos or kos event usually involves free roaming, and I dont enjoy these events. Oh and saying events are only good because they have a good story isn't always true. 
 

  • You are entirely correct here - How shall I make it more enjoyable: (AKA This is how)
On 4/11/2017 at 6:42 AM, Lynx said:


Members being attracted to events means that there is a really solid core story to the event, as well as being given the freedom to explore and analyse the map to give the full RP experience. These are both things that I am able to incorporate and by doing so will increase enjoyment of the event.
 

  • Actually thanks for the 'Good Idea' - I am glad you think this is a good one. 
  • Even if roaming is not new, it will be something I will encourage into my events. Please, do not infer that this means free roaming but more along the lines of 'directed' roaming but still enough freedom to explore. 
  • Wait hold on... Please elaborate on the "good story isn't always true" - A moment ago you were criticising me for "unlore friendly" now you say it doesn't need to be from lore???
  • IF YOU WOULD LIKE ME TO RESPOND TO THE EVENT FEEDBACK PLEASE SAY SO WHEN YOU REPOST. 
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On 4/11/2017 at 2:14 PM, Gotaki said:

+1 These events are very detailed, interesting, well planned and thought out. I believe Lynx would make a great Event Master if given the chance.

 

4 hours ago, Ridge said:

+1 cool guy in game, friendly and the clone event looks really nice.

 

4 hours ago, Hisoka said:

+1 Cool dude in-game and would be a good event master.

Thank you so much for your support. Really appreciate it!! :)

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Cool guy, seen him around, love to see him pull off these events, so detailed and soooo much work pt into em. Occasional fact error Echo base should not have even been established yet. It was established around a month, not even before the empire attacked it in the movie. so maybe make it like a different base because if were in the time of Rogue one, we shouldn't know about echo base nor should it exist.

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THE DEATH RESPONSE

First of all, I did this all on my phone during 12:58 am. But yes, next time ill try to type more carefully. And i'm not using quotes because I don't know how to remove them. Thank you for responding to my criticism.

Let's start from the beginning.

Plagiarism. Plagiarism doesn't exactly have to be the whole story you Muppet, it can just to be ideas from a story, so I don't know why you're defining it for me when it says "ideas" in the definition. It's pretty clear, ideas from the Battle of Hoth were stolen. Echo base has been found by the Empire, They are invaded by the empire, they lose to the empire. You did not include at-at's and all that because they aren't in IG or Gmod. That's exactly the summary layout of your event. People that actually love star wars can say "Hey, this reminds me of the Battle of Hoth".

The only altered parts is that you obtained your information from hacking networks, you didn't use things that aren't in gmod, you split the groups in 3 and you ended it with a lost at first and you just blew the place up. Oh yea, and the Jedi.

No it’s not called a Triadic Structure because it makes no sense. Read it 3 times. A Triadic structure is just 3 words/sentences/clauses, so I don’t know how not speaking fluent English makes it a Triadic structure. Muppet. Does “Deep throughout events” make sense to you?

HAhaha, it’s funny to see someone trying to justify that they don’t want to become a high rank on a server because they believe it would make them more seen and they’ll be given more respect.

The response for your last part makes jack shit sense. “Changing up the people who often participate to encourage other who are perhaps new to the server or ‘older’ who might want to participate in them again”. What do you mean by again? Does that mean they’ve played yesterday?. The only people that often play in events are the event masters or t-mods and above. So wait, you’ll tell common event players to encourage new and senior players to join participate in events again? New players (I’m just saying ST) should not be given more playing time as event characters than the people in the middle and above. I don’t know why you are slowly giving away event character playtime to newer players when the people in the middle would just complain that they never play as event characters. Don’t respond to this by saying “no, we’ll still have the people in the middle have equal play time, but this technique would be used in 5 events a week. The extended events are the worse if they aren’t after the first event.

Although possibly could happen every 5-6 events. So that’s a maybe, not a no. In the heat of battle and their type of environment. So you are saying, you’ll give a Hoth map to Snow troopers because it’s their specialities(they fight and travel better I guess in snow), but even though everyone else can just do as much as the Snow troopers can. Unless you like create a blizzard storm and only Snow troopers can fight in it?

Short, Sharp and Sweet. Short but so broad, Sharp but somehow so broad and sweet??!?!?!?!

SWEEET?!?!?!?!

I’m surprised this has all been the first question.

By combining both previous experience from the current Event Masters.

Let’s see what you said

  • It means that events that current EM might like to have help in forming ideas for events and I am willing to present my ideas to them, together piecing 'bit by bit' an event. OK?
  • My previous experience in events means that I have both been on the Imperial (trooper) perspective many times while also been in events, against the Empire (event perspective). Pretty much what I said earlier!!! 

Your first point doesn’t relate at all for what I’m calling you out for. The key words for the idea I’m calling you out for is PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE & CURRENT EVENT MASTER. YOU WOULD GIVE YOUR IDEAS TO EVENT STAFF BECAUSE IT’S A “PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE”. AND THEN YOU GIVE ME ATTITUDE BECAUSE YOU THINK THAT YOU’RE RIGHT.

Why are you saying you have seen the Imperial perspective many times, you are A IMPERIAL TROOPER, THE MAJORITY OF THE SERVER ARE IMPERIALTROOPERS. While also been in events, against the Empire.(Why are you adding commas? Adding the comma between events & against makes it have no purpose, but just pauses the sentence for no reason)So against the Empire you mean- Jedi, Rebel and all that. How is that relevant from the PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE FROM THE CURRENT EVENT MASTER.

How is that hard to comprehend. Read the whole ending sentence you Muppet. It means that SAYING EVENTS ARE ONLY GOOD BECAUSE THEY HAVE A GOOD STORY ISN’T ALWAYS THE CASE. THE PLOT LINE COULD JUST BE SPACE AIDS AND NOTHING MORE AND PEOPLE WOULD ENJOY IT.

Jesus...

Wait, your prohibiting players to explore certain areas? Why?

AND COME AT ME, RESPOND ABOUT THE EVENT 1, I WILL SHRED YOU!

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To Setsuna - Almost!

To Bearmax - Wow I just realised that we are both putting in so much effort into this argument, but you should know I am not a person who gives up! ANOTHER BIG POST! THIS IS ONLY THE FEEDBACK I AM RESPONDING TO - EVENT COMES NEXT!
Let's have a look at your response:

23 minutes ago, Bearmax said:

Plagiarism. Plagiarism doesn't exactly have to be the whole story you Muppet, it can just to be ideas from a story, so I don't know why you're defining it for me when it says "ideas" in the definition. It's pretty clear, ideas from the Battle of Hoth were stolen. Echo base has been found by the Empire, They are invaded by the empire, they lose to the empire. You did not include at-at's and all that because they aren't in IG or Gmod. That's exactly the summary layout of your event. People that actually love star wars can say "Hey, this reminds me of the Battle of Hoth".

  • Right so the definition you put forward I utterly agree with and although I do not agree with the use of 'stolen' it is somewhat true, HOWEVER if this is the case then many events have been plagiarised! While I have been observing EMs they use concepts already within Star Wars lore and ADAPT them so they are not 'carbon copies' - This is exactly what I have tried to do!
  • Really AT-ATs aren't in GMOD huh kinda thought they were here. - Be more specific!!!
  • The whole point of events is that others can recreate fantastic moments that have been in Star Wars and create new ones!
37 minutes ago, Bearmax said:

No it’s not called a Triadic Structure because it makes no sense. Read it 3 times. A Triadic structure is just 3 words/sentences/clauses, so I don’t know how not speaking fluent English makes it a Triadic structure. Muppet. Does “Deep throughout events” make sense to you?

HAhaha, it’s funny to see someone trying to justify that they don’t want to become a high rank on a server because they believe it would make them more seen and they’ll be given more respect.

  • I know what Triadic Structure is Doofus (I am the one to bring it up!) - Yes it does make sense to me and probably does to a large amount of the population!
  • But actually this is the case - I only look forward to creating some awesome events, I don't care about the highs and lows that comes with the job - I'll manage it as I go!
46 minutes ago, Bearmax said:

The response for your last part makes jack shit sense. “Changing up the people who often participate to encourage other who are perhaps new to the server or ‘older’ who might want to participate in them again”. What do you mean by again? Does that mean they’ve played yesterday?. The only people that often play in events are the event masters or t-mods and above. So wait, you’ll tell common event players to encourage new and senior players to join participate in events again? New players (I’m just saying ST) should not be given more playing time as event characters than the people in the middle and above. I don’t know why you are slowly giving away event character playtime to newer players when the people in the middle would just complain that they never play as event characters. Don’t respond to this by saying “no, we’ll still have the people in the middle have equal play time, but this technique would be used in 5 events a week. The extended events are the worse if they aren’t after the first event.

  • No 'again' is a general term used to specify previously. In this topic I am only talking about the way I will conduct events, not if each person playing is monitored and checked to see if they have participated recently. GENERAL TERMS DUDE!
  • You are really taking this too far - It is not 'Who has had the most event playing time' it is called 'immersion with different people to change it up'.
  • Look the other point is that I will include people from all levels of the server. (In events this maybe more higher ups than STs but at least if I get an ST involved every event they get to have the experience.)
  • Just simply 'Giving others a try' OK NOW??? - Talk about inequality among trooper ranks.
55 minutes ago, Bearmax said:

Although possibly could happen every 5-6 events. So that’s a maybe, not a no. In the heat of battle and their type of environment. So you are saying, you’ll give a Hoth map to Snow troopers because it’s their specialities(they fight and travel better I guess in snow), but even though everyone else can just do as much as the Snow troopers can. Unless you like create a blizzard storm and only Snow troopers can fight in it?

Short, Sharp and Sweet. Short but so broad, Sharp but somehow so broad and sweet??!?!?!?!

SWEEET?!?!?!?!

I’m surprised this has all been the first question.

  • Yea well what is wrong with 'maybe'? It will create an impression of what the regiment is like if it goes ahead.
  • OK - This is what RP is all about!!! I am not saying that each regiment can't do what snow troopers do but maybe you set all non-snow troopers to have a -15 HP penalty later in the event or something like that. This isn't a free promotion into snow troopers it is just for the event!
  • Good Idea - For a blizzard but nah
  • OMG - Dude don't criticise an expression! - You were just complaining that they were brief reasons!!!
  • Completely agree.
1 hour ago, Bearmax said:

Your first point doesn’t relate at all for what I’m calling you out for. The key words for the idea I’m calling you out for is PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE & CURRENT EVENT MASTER. YOU WOULD GIVE YOUR IDEAS TO EVENT STAFF BECAUSE IT’S A “PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE”. AND THEN YOU GIVE ME ATTITUDE BECAUSE YOU THINK THAT YOU’RE RIGHT.

  • OK no - What I am saying is that my ideas could be incorporated not because they have been used before!
  • Ahh well yea because I can illustrate what I am saying so you can understand me.
  • P.S. INCORRECT GRAMMAR - Don't start sentences with 'AND' :(
1 hour ago, Bearmax said:

Why are you saying you have seen the Imperial perspective many times, you are A IMPERIAL TROOPER, THE MAJORITY OF THE SERVER ARE IMPERIALTROOPERS. While also been in events, against the Empire.(Why are you adding commas? Adding the comma between events & against makes it have no purpose, but just pauses the sentence for no reason)So against the Empire you mean- Jedi, Rebel and all that. How is that relevant from the PREVIOUS EXPERIENCE FROM THE CURRENT EVENT MASTER.

How is that hard to comprehend. Read the whole ending sentence you Muppet. It means that SAYING EVENTS ARE ONLY GOOD BECAUSE THEY HAVE A GOOD STORY ISN’T ALWAYS THE CASE. THE PLOT LINE COULD JUST BE SPACE AIDS AND NOTHING MORE AND PEOPLE WOULD ENJOY IT.

  • I do it so that you can understand (Because clearly you don't) that I have participated in events that have been fantastic and overwhelming liked by the IG community. So I understand the backbone behind great events!
  • Sorry about that comma.
  • But that isn't always true either - If you don't actually plan an event it is more likely to be bad then good. I'd rather be in the higher chance.
1 hour ago, Bearmax said:

Wait, your prohibiting players to explore certain areas? Why?

  • NO OMFG - I never have said prohibited but directing e.g. to the South (180 degrees).

Event response from your feedback will comeback shortly. 

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Right ho so your analysis:

12 hours ago, Bearmax said:

Preperation. You say that you will have more people acting in the event, but there is 4-8, a usual number of event characters. 

Wow thanks for telling me their roles and keys in the beginning, now i have to check wtf their roles and keys are in the text.

  • I think we have already covered this. (Correct me if I am wrong)
  • Your Welcome! ;)
  • Just so you know the reason I don't have a role of names for the event is depending on the number of people on the server will depend on the number of people involved in the event.
12 hours ago, Bearmax said:

wait, is this a fken script? Fk me....!! This is from a characters point of view. He narrates what is happening during the briefing in past tence, then he switches to dialogue, where he is asking people to ask snow troopers on how to survive in the snow?!?! Wtf 

Why are you just freely recruiting people in the snow troopers? That's just stupid. Youre forcing people to play as snow troopers so that they can become the most seen regiment. Although it is a promotion, but the only people i'd recruit are st's. I wouldnt want to briefly leave my regiment to join a snow version of st.

  • OK you clearly haven't read the whole picture:
  • Yes I decided to do a script format for both briefing and debriefing and you obviously have a problem with that so you can put it into past tense for me!
  • Nope - Covered above ^^^
  • P.S. Not forcing 'optional' and it will be only for the event. To get into their reg. they would still have to pass tryouts and all the regiment's requirements. 
12 hours ago, Bearmax said:

No dividing the Imperial army. There would be a knight to stand up and demand he'll be the leader, and people will bitch on whose the leader. You cant expect events with high detail in low stakes parts to exactly be perfect. There will be people who split up and do their own things. Leading regimental commanders would complain about how their troops are forced to work wth other regiments. Especially with a snow trooper in command, just because they know how to the lyrics to frozen. 

Worst of all when splitting regiments, the split groups would have differnet types of experience. GROUP a might verse aliens, Group b would verse rebels and group c would capture someone. 

  • He can demand all he wants but in the end the EM running the event has the final say! 
  • That's fine even if say Ada squad split up themselves that is their choice.
  • Dude it is called 'Teamwork' - Creating ties with other regiments
  • Experience can be shared and all of it usually is used anyway.
12 hours ago, Bearmax said:

I didnt find anything about the troopers reuniting, if you find it please correct me.

You can easily gun down a ship with 60troops. It'd be hard to avoid the shots.

I swear, if you think the rebel guards would last against the sith and several troopers, youre fucked. 

  • This tells me you just scanned through the event at whatever time it was (12:58am)
On 4/11/2017 at 6:42 AM, Lynx said:

Bantha squad eventually gets overwhelmed and asks for immediate support after being flanked from behind. The other two squads then come for back up as they head towards the direction of Echo Base met with large amounts of rebel opposition. They take many casualties on as they advance so hold their position.

  • Sure I will give you this one - Maybe it will be better if I increase the amount of ships - Good Idea B|
  • That is why there are two separate objectives DUDE! - Possible extension of amount of guards
12 hours ago, Bearmax said:

They are then jumped on by more rebels and Jedi. Somehow Jedi suddenly appear, instead of helping in the base. Did they wait because they just arrived? Why would the Jedi had left the base? Did they know that they were going to be attacked? Did the Jedi hyperspace to Hoth?! Wouldnt the Navy just detect it, making the troopers and sith prepared. Why didnt the star destroyer gun the rebel transport ship coming into Hoth?

Ok I just read the Hoth lore. YES There was a Echo base, but it was overun by the empire, not blown to bits. I can tell you checked the Hoth briefly but you just modified the lore, making yourself look like it is a decent event. Oh and Luke was in the alliance fighting back against the Imperials. If you didn't realise Krennic died before Luke joined the war.

Your event is just basically a deformed and modified version of the actual lore. 

  • OK you have proven I have not quite figured out all the details in this event HOWEVER it is possible rebels sent a distress transmission to the Jedi and that was the earliest they could get there. Maybe he was not stationed there. Did they? Did he/she? Did this ship have an inbuilt scrambler for Imperial Scanners? Did this ship have a cloak?
  • To my understanding it might be a 'decent event'. Who said the Jedi was Luke? 
  • Events are supposed to be modified from LORE!!!
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If you guys check my first response, I have edited it to give a +1. Lynx has deserved it. Although he has several flaws in his events and responses. He came up to me with a pair of balls and non-stop kept on replying to my replies. From this amount of effort and determination into trying to defend himself, all to get himself into Event Staff, he has earned it. Well Done, More feed back will be given if you reply to me privately. :) Keep the good effort and determination whilst you are Event Master. 

p.s ty for admitting where you went wrong, that shows you've are ready to take criticism.

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13 hours ago, Bearmax said:


+1 After several replies from Lynx, he has proven to me he is determined for Event staff, he did his best to reply to all my criteria. 

 

4 hours ago, Smiddy said:

I'm sorry, i loved how you roasted bear. +1

 

3 hours ago, Setsuna said:

+1     

Cool guy, seen him around, love to see him pull off these events, so detailed and soooo much work pt into em. Occasional fact error Echo base should not have even been established yet. It was established around a month, not even before the empire attacked it in the movie. so maybe make it like a different base because if were in the time of Rogue one, we shouldn't know about echo base nor should it exist.

 

9 minutes ago, O'Hare said:

All responses I have just read are Really positive,  Your app is looking good +1

Thank you so much for your support. Really appreciate it!! :) - Especially Bearmax for really pushing me to explain extra small details within my events!

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If I could +2 I would aye. This set of reply's but also how incredibly written this application is, if anything blows anything I could write, outta the water. After reading this app, I was surprised. I knew Lynx was very bright, going to Queenstown, but damn, this app really proved me wrong man. Hes a genius. Lynx has been with me from the beginning of my reign with Shadow, 3 months ago. He comes on at different times, stays active, and has a positive and open minded out-look on all experiences, he seems to have in game and out of game. Bro, hes stuck with me thick and thin, offers me great advice regularly, and has spent a lot of time evaluating new troopers in the reg. Hes got a good knack for judgement about people, who they are, what they are like, and what is the best way to talk to them (aye hes learnt from the best). Would be epic for Lynx to get Event Master, hes got the irl quals for it, hes actually a Stage Manager in his School Life, and he still makes time for RP. Also his Avatar is Yellow. +1

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Just an instinct and gut feeling to change
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Seems like you spent great effort in planing these events. +1 come say hi to CIC so I can meet you in character haven't met you before

 

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On 4/14/2017 at 11:06 PM, Divisionary said:

If I could +2 I would aye. This set of reply's but also how incredibly written this application is, if anything blows anything I could write, outta the water...

Note: Thanks for putting in lots of effort in your comment! 

6 hours ago, Mirror Image said:

+1

Very kind and smart person. Application and Event looks really good. Very determined and really wants this opportunity as Event Master.

-Mirror

 

2 hours ago, Sal said:

Seems like you spent great effort in planing these events. +1 come say hi to CIC so I can meet you in character haven't met you before

 

Thank you so much for your support. Really appreciate it!! :) - And Sal, I will be sure to visit CIC sometime soon in the future.

 
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