You have a good idea of how PAC works, but the examples themselves I don't think really show off your creativity and potential ideas as they largely seem like the same thing. As I always suggest to people, it's good to check out accepted applications to look at other works for reference.
While your honesty is appreciated, simple PAC's just aren't enough to be accepted given the limited number of slots and the amount of people applying for it. Really push yourself and try to make examples that will set you apart from other applicants
Best of luck
- Pulse -