Looking through the application, though it is quite short, and would do well to include some more detail and better formatting for your event ideas, all of the info is there. It shows an advanced view on the EM team covering all of the areas we try to cover, if you are able to withhold these standards and idea's, i believe you could be a great member of the team!
After re thinking my response ima end up leaving you with a Neutral
It is great to see you taking feedback from the community and being open to change and making you application better, because of this i will be bumping my vote up to a +1 As reacting to feedback is a good way to become a better EM if/when you get it. As well as that they changes you made make this into a better application worthy of a +1.