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Fluency's Event Master Application | 6/4/2017

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Steam Name: (IG) Fluency

 

Age: I am 14 years old

 

Do you have a microphone that you can use regularly? Yes, i use my microphone alot unless I'm near Vader/Palpatine  or a high ranking officer to show respect.

 

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:63093333

 

In-game name and rank: [Black-6] Fluency & I am Junior Crewman

 

Time Played: 6 days which will soon be 1 week

 

Why are you applying for this position?: I've always been fascinated by movies, books & games because of the story line and how it evolves into a really good/nice new world were anything was possible. That is why i believe that I should be a Event Master because I have such a good imagination and ideas that flow through my mind. I have been playing on the server for a long enough time to grasp a brief on what an Event Master does on our server. I believe i can bring a lot of fun to our server players through role-play in general. I was once a Event Master on a old server which was sadly shutdown but I believe i will do a good job on our server, I believe i will surprise & impress players on what i can bring to our community.

 

How will allowing you to be apart of our staff team help us?: If i was added to the EM Team i believe i will bring enjoyment & humor to the group as well as being able to put a smile on anyone's face if they were feeling down.

 

Have you been an Event Master on previous servers? If so please list them: I have been event master on one other server which was

- Instinct Gaming (But they fell apart quite quick after the owner disbanded us)

 

Have you had any warnings, kicks or bans if so please list them: Now there is no reason to hide it, i was a minge when i 1st joined the server & to be honest it was one of the dumbest moves I've ever done. My first impression on most people wasn't great but i think everyone deserves a second chance.

1) Hisoka - FailRP - 3/31/2017

2) Hisoka - Interfering With Event - 4/1/2017

3) Hisoka - Abusing Glitches - 4/5/2017 - There was a glitch were if you opened a door it would disappear and i opened my bunk door without knowing.

 

What can you do to make events more enjoyable and attract more people?: From past experience in other regiments i have heard some pretty 'bad' things about events & what they should fix. This plays another huge role for me to apply because everyone should be included with their own personal regiment role.

- I would make sure every regiment has a unique role

- I would make sure everyone has a chance to be an event character & not just choose people i know that are good

- I'd have more lore events

- I'd make sure that my events had a deep story & not just pushed together

 

Anything else you would like to add: Before i start my example events i'd like to say: Thank you for this opportunity. If i was accepted i wouldn't let you guys down because i know how much this server means to all of us. 

Two different example events that you will do if you get accepted for the position of Event Master:

 

EVENT 1  

Name - Mystery Of Thrawn

Characters - Grand Admiral Thrawn, 5 Rebels, 3 Storm-Troopers

Map -  Naboo

Story -

Grand Admiral Thrawn calls a Debrief at MH1, Throughout the Debrief he keeps giving key information that himself & 3 other storm troopers will be leaving the ship to search a abounded ship floating a few kilometers away from the Super Star Destroyer.  The Emperor is quite worried about this mission but accepts the fate and lets them leave.

 During the flight towards the Abounded ship the Emperor gets a Force Feeling about the Grand Admiral not being safe. He calls all sith to the Quarters & explains what is happening & what they need to do. The Emperor makes 2 groups of sith for. Group 1 must check the Bridge, 3rd & 2nd floor to search for any Rogue Troopers whilst the other group check MH1, MH2,  TIE Bay & first floor to also search for any Rogue troopers. Nothing is found until a broken, static comms come through saying ''This is Grand Admiral! We are captured & heading to Naboo''  

Emperor calls a quick Debrief that states the following ''As many of you know, Grand Admiral Thrawn took three storm troopers to search out a abounded ship. On their journey they were captured & are now heading to Naboo! ALL TROOPERS GET TO MH1 WE ARE TAKING OFF FOR NABOO ASAP! SCATTER GO!'' There will be 3 Dropships & one Lambda spawned in MH1 for pilots or qualified pilots to fly. Lambda will only be flown by actual pilots or sith that are eligible to fly.

 In Naboo a T.V will be spawned for the players  whilst the Rebels are re-modeled & setup. Thrawn will hide in the sewers with the rebels surrounding him, A total of 15 Npc's will be spawned around the sewers & at the entrances. when this is being setup Emperor would have removed the T.V and started to allocate certain roles to each regiment; Sith will scout the outsides of the city, Storm Troopers will scout the top surface of the city as well as checking every building, Navy & ISB will be in a HQ contacting & talking to other regiments for any Intel about  Thrawn's location, Shock/Riot will take station out front of the HQ to guard, Death Troopers will go underground into the sewers. For any other regiment that doesn't have a role will stay with their Commander/Acting Commander who will setup a guard/defense post

When the Death Troopers or other regiment find Thrawn & take out all of the rebels guarding him, They will proceed to escort him back to the HQ. Thrawn will than ask ''Where are my troopers?'' sadly a ISB Officer will have to break the bad news about the Storm troopers they found dead hanging between two buildings. Through comms everyone will be ordered to get back to 'LZ' Asap as they are going to start a Gas Run over the city to eliminate the Rebels for treason, The troopers will take-off before the gas run as well as changing maps back to Star Destroyer. 

At the star destroyer a small debrief will happen that will include; Regiment Rankings, Promotions & a huge thank you from the Grand Admiral for saving him. Thrawn will than be transported to Med-Bay to patch up his wounds. THE END 

 

EVENT 2 

Name - Gas Leak (Passive Event)

Characters - Engineer Director, Rogue Engineer, Admiral, Krennic

Map - Star Destroyer 

Story - 

A Rogue trooper has broken into the Star Destroyer and has slowly been searching through the ISB & Navy files to find a way to quietly explode the engine, He has stolen valid ID which allows him to enter certain areas quickly & swiftly. He first entered the ISB HQ to search through all the files that Director Krennic was hiding, He will find all the Intel for upcoming missions. next he entered the Bridge were he rummaged through Grand Admiral Thrawn's computer finding out all the details of the engine. He made his way to the engine room were he decided it was time to make a small bomb.

Director Krennic will comms in that a Rogue trooper has been rummaging through private Intel that needs to be returned, Troopers will immediately search the ship for this traitor but by this time the bomb was placed. The Rogue trooper will comms in to the Rebels; ''Bomb has been placed! SWARM THE BACKUP!''. The navy will receive signals from their scanners which will pickup the 1 rebel transport ship as well as 2 rebel bomb ships. The Admiral will then send out a comms to all pilots to prepare their ships for a attack. 

The pilots will quickly leave the TIE Base to swarm the rebel ships, They will shoot them down. In the ship Director Krennic has contacted all the Engineers to defuse the bomb. The Engineers will be working their butts off to try to defuse the bomb but run out of time, The bomb will than explode making the Engineer Director comms into Krennic; ''Director, the bomb has exploded we have a total of 5 minutes to stabilize the ship or we will have to evacuate''. A few minutes later the engineers will be successful and stabilize the engine but the biggest threat was now battling the rebels.

The pilots by this time would have cleared the air, The admiral than announces; ''The rebel fighters are down! Eliminate the rest!'' sure enough as soon as the Admiral said this all the Rebel Scums were defeated besides the Rogue Engineer that was cuffed & moved towards the front of  Debrief.

Debrief will be called by Director Krennic, He will state the Regiment Rankings, Trooper Promotions as well as conducting the firing line to shoot down the Rogue Engineer but before he dies Krennic asks him to say his last words; ''I came here to do 1 thing, that is to destroy you and to watch your high ranking officers die in front of me!'' the troopers are than ordered to fire at will. Debrief will be dismissed. END (Passive Events Are Meant To Be Short)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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-1. There are several large errors between your 2 events. In the first one it would make no sense for G.A Thrawn to head to an *abandoned star destroyer with 3 other ST's. He would send over someone like the Commandos or Death Troopers to check it out. What on Earth is a "force feeling"? The second event is even worse and shows no originality as it has been done dozens of times, hell, the same event was done only a few days ago.

Until you can come up with some original events that are also realistic in the Star Wars universe, my -1 will stay.

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-1 as pine jack pointed out with your  events there is some errors with it. Although you are a nice person I don't really know you so sorry.

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 During the flight towards the Abounded ship the Emperor gets a Force Feeling about the Grand Admiral not being safe. He calls all sith to the Quarters & explains what is happening & what they need to do. The Emperor makes 2 groups of sith for. Group 1 must check the Bridge, 3rd & 2nd floor to search for any Rogue Troopers whilst the other group check MH1, MH2,  TIE Bay & first floor to also search for any Rogue troopers. Nothing is found until a broken, static comms come through saying ''This is Grand Admiral! We are captured & heading to Naboo''  

Nice Story Setting and build up. But your gonna have to understand, as a new Event Master, you can't rely on the top of the top for all your events. Most of your events will involve you hosting the debriefing. I think this is a good start, and be sure to save this application in your own Folders. I think this comment section if used as a good place for constructive feedback, could be used as a great stepping stone to re-apply in the future.   Neutral.

Also good job for bringing out a full fledged App after the Meeting last night with Tarkin in his office.

Keep up the good work flying high Fluently. 

P.S.  Say 'Hi'  to the new Pilot Commander for me.

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17 minutes ago, Divisionary said:

P.S.  Say 'Hi'  to the new Pilot Commander for me.

I wonder who that n00b is... :ph34r:

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12 minutes ago, goliath said:

 

I wonder who that n00b is... :ph34r:

Better be someone good ^_^

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-1 Fluency, you were part of ISB until you called Darth Vader a "Nigerian" or a similar word regarding black people. 

Subsequently, you were kicked for being immature. 

I would personally not like to see you part of the team for that reason.

Also, your events seem to lack originality.

Otherwise. Thanks for reading & and good luck with the application,

Katelyn.   

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NEUTRAL - Events need a lot more thought put in them. Not sure about attitude and determination to the task at hand. You've got to really focus on the minor details as @pinejack stated above. Keen to make this a +1 if you work at the events and be willing to change them. On the over hand, you need to actually prove to the community that your level of maturity have increased. 

 

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-1. I'm sorry but the way Pilots act is pretty awful. I'm -1 this all because the regiment you are in has a huge impact on your rep.  Pilots have a pretty awful reputation(no offence) and, as I am a bully, I see all Pilots as unfit for staff.

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Thank you for all you responses

 

@Bearmax I do see what you mean but the reason i joined pilots last week was to try to fix this issue & what people think of them. Thanks you anyways.

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-1

Abandoned***********

I'm Glad that your honest, that's good.

Event 1 makes literally no sense. A Grand Admiral would never enter an "abounded" Ship with 3-4 STs.

Also, what was strange that before you started typing up your event, your grammar and English wasn't that bad. And then it went full stroke when

the event was typed. What happened? I was reading and going, "Oh, He put the time in to correct and stuff, awesome", i had faith and you took it from me

why do you do these things?

Why would Thrawn use STs? They would provide like Zero protection for him if he enters. Plus, Why don't we just scan the ship for life forms? Surely the Navy is smart enough to 

do something like that. Then the Emperor as a good ol' "Force Feeling", You know, as you do. i have them all the time.

And then the emperor sends the Sith to search our ship for "Rouge Troopers"? what? Why? what are these "Rouge Troopers" and why would they

have anything to do with the kid napping of an Admiral? Why are they checking for them? There was never any mention before-hand of a Rouge... there's no reason

for a rouge trooper to be on OUR Star destroyer... THEN the Admiral sends in a message stating that they have been captured, Probably by rebels because they knew EXACTLY

that Thrawn would come and not anyone who is made to deal with situations like that (EG, Commandos, DT, STR and Scouts...) .

So, Rebels Take him to Naboo and put him in the sewer.... Sweet. Then you give all the regiments scouting and Guarding objectives, this event sounds fun.

You will spawn exactly 15 rebels in the sewer for exactly 70+ players on the server? Dude, what? When we rescue Thrawn from the terrifying 15

rebels that will be wiped out in less than 4 seconds, he asks about the 4 troopers that went with him? Why would he care? they are just some STs...

You will Gas the entire city of Naboo? Wha- You know they have like actual civilians there yeah? like the Emperor is not Hitler, he doesn't go around

Gassing people he doesn't like. He will certainly kill Rebels, but not an entire Civilisation with a little bit of Rebel Activity....

I Don't think The Emperor (Trident)  would agree to this, Nor would Thrawn (Gamma)... Both are almost always busy and work tirelessly to keep the server going.

2nd Event Happened like 2 or 4 days ago and it has been done before... Originality is key.  

 

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I would make a detailed response on this application, but it seems it's already been done for me.

On 06/06/2017 at 5:32 PM, Fox/Footloose said:

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Abandoned***********

I'm Glad that your honest, that's good.

Event 1 makes literally no sense. A Grand Admiral would never enter an "abounded" Ship with 3-4 STs.

Also, what was strange that before you started typing up your event, your grammar and English wasn't that bad. And then it went full stroke when

the event was typed. What happened? I was reading and going, "Oh, He put the time in to correct and stuff, awesome", i had faith and you took it from me

why do you do these things?

Why would Thrawn use STs? They would provide like Zero protection for him if he enters. Plus, Why don't we just scan the ship for life forms? Surely the Navy is smart enough to 

do something like that. Then the Emperor as a good ol' "Force Feeling", You know, as you do. i have them all the time.

And then the emperor sends the Sith to search our ship for "Rouge Troopers"? what? Why? what are these "Rouge Troopers" and why would they

have anything to do with the kid napping of an Admiral? Why are they checking for them? There was never any mention before-hand of a Rouge... there's no reason

for a rouge trooper to be on OUR Star destroyer... THEN the Admiral sends in a message stating that they have been captured, Probably by rebels because they knew EXACTLY

that Thrawn would come and not anyone who is made to deal with situations like that (EG, Commandos, DT, STR and Scouts...) .

So, Rebels Take him to Naboo and put him in the sewer.... Sweet. Then you give all the regiments scouting and Guarding objectives, this event sounds fun.

You will spawn exactly 15 rebels in the sewer for exactly 70+ players on the server? Dude, what? When we rescue Thrawn from the terrifying 15

rebels that will be wiped out in less than 4 seconds, he asks about the 4 troopers that went with him? Why would he care? they are just some STs...

You will Gas the entire city of Naboo? Wha- You know they have like actual civilians there yeah? like the Emperor is not Hitler, he doesn't go around

Gassing people he doesn't like. He will certainly kill Rebels, but not an entire Civilisation with a little bit of Rebel Activity....

I Don't think The Emperor (Trident)  would agree to this, Nor would Thrawn (Gamma)... Both are almost always busy and work tirelessly to keep the server going.

2nd Event Happened like 2 or 4 days ago and it has been done before... Originality is key.  

 

-1 Bad application, bad events.

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-1 Reasons:

  • Too many warnings
  • Minge
  • Not gonna lie, the First event sucks the second one is pretty lame too...
  • You do not have good enough RP to be an event master/staff on the server

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