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Tyson

Neils PAC application Tier 1

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 Steam Details

Steam Name: Gaydalf

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:70980311

Steam Profile link:https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198102226351/

In Game Details

In Game Name:[224-04] Neil

In Game Rank:Staff sergeant 

In Game Regiment:224th-[mud trooper]

Time Played (Server Time/ Must Provide Screenshot evidence):

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PAC3 Questions

Have you used PAC Before: Yes on other military servers a little very brief 

Why should you be trusted with PAC (1 Paragraph): The reason I think I should be trusted is because of how many hours I've put into these packs it might not be much and probably standard to other but to me a newbie at this kind of thing I think I've got the potential to learn I'm up to any comments and suggestions that anyone has and I'll try to fix or improve my PACS anytime. Every day I go onto singleplayer and I try my butt off to become creative and something that would "WOW" a crowd if that doesn't tell you how desperate I've tried to get this then I don't know what will. 

Why do you want access to PAC (1 Paragraph): I am a man who likes to stand out to show my ideas and creativity in the art of PAC that I could express to people which could also improve my skills with suggestions that could push me forward to making more unique creations with PAC and I'd love my regiment to stand out as unique that would make us look more dominant and would entice people to potentially want to tryouts that would benefit my regiment enough if numbers get low .

 Why do you believe you deserve PAC (1 Paragraph): I believe the reason I deserve PAC is that my loyalty to the server has been excessive and I put many hours into this server I kind to think everyone on there as a family I've trained many recruits in my day and almost most all of them become great members of this community and are now thriving in there own regiments. I all have spent many hours doing these packs to some people they might be terrific and low standards but I believe that yes looks are everything but all the time I've put into making these has to mean something, in my opinion, I believe that these are alright for my area of pack so far this is only my second time doing Pac for a server and its really different compared to military RP. Basically, these Pac submissions are me, in a nutshell, they are expressing my creativity and the potential I have in learning more and improving to bigger scales. Even tho I might fail it doesn't matter because that's just gonna push me as a person and try my butt off harder than I have ever done before watching all the tutorials and get as much knowledge as I can nothing will stop me from getting PAC its the one accomplishment I've always wanted to hit since I joined the server and saw other players with there's it was memorizing and that's why I think I should at least have a chance to experience PAC.  

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Neutral

Reasons:
PAC examples are somewhat unique and look nice
You're been very active recently

Application is a bit messy with plenty of grammatical errors

Haven't got a feel for who you are as a person/ Don't see you get into many RP situations

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Thx for the feedback i went back and looked all over and fixed all the spelling and grammar errors that is why its white boxed because i pasted it down after a Grammarly check

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25 minutes ago, Cecil said:

Neutral

Reasons:
PAC examples are somewhat unique and look nice
You're been very active recently

Application is a bit messy with plenty of grammatical errors

Haven't got a feel for who you are as a person/ Don't see you get into many RP situations

Neutral

Goodluck

-Rickle

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Thx rickle for the feedback I

went back and looked all over and fixed all the spelling and grammar errors that is why its white boxed

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I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to -1 this due to,

The pacs being very simple,

and I haven't had a chance to assess you on your behavior

 

*Subject to change*

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20 minutes ago, Eclipse said:

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to -1 this due to,

The pacs being very simple,

and I haven't had a chance to assess you on your behavior

 

*Subject to change*

These pac3’s are actually quite advanced for a tier one application and show great creativity. My problem with this app is the highlighting, hurts my eyes. And secondly I haven’t seen much of you. Fix these things and I’ll reconsidwr.

Neutral For now

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5 hours ago, Cecil said:

Neutral

Reasons:
PAC examples are somewhat unique and look nice
You're been very active recently

Application is a bit messy with plenty of grammatical errors

Haven't got a feel for who you are as a person/ Don't see you get into many RP situations

 

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12 hours ago, [IG] Tackxo said:

+1
Literal spastic but good bloke lmaoxd

So much so that he actually hurts my ears when he talks. 

 

Anyway... +1 - good examples, but there's like 1 or 2 from 224th.

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Answers for PAC3 applications are to be kept in white. It’s stated in the application rules (bottom of the template).

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- Fairly unique PACs that are of decent quality for a tier 1 application.

Application responses could use more detail

- Haven't seen you around enough on the server and had no RP interactions with you.

NEUTRAL

I quite like the examples provided for this application but unfortunately your written responses are letting you down. Try and add some more detail into "why you believe you deserve PAC" especially. Try and and interact with others a bit more in-game to get yourself out there and become known in the community. I've seen you a few times passing by in the corridor but apart from that I've had no personal interactions with you in RP. Feel free to correct me if that statement is unfair but it seems that a few people feel the same.

Best of luck.

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Netrual

1. the answers are white boxed meaning they have been copyed from some ware if you have a screen shot of where you got them from like a Notepad i would love to see it

2. Never seen you on before 

3. Pacs are quite simple

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@charles the notepad part isn't true as demonstrated by this reply. Anyone can type like this by selecting the background color option...

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On 10/11/2018 at 9:48 AM, charles said:

Netrual

1. the answers are white boxed meaning they have been copyed from some ware if you have a screen shot of where you got them from like a Notepad i would love to see it

2. Never seen you on before 

3. Pacs are quite simple

 

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16 hours ago, Cecil said:

Neutral

Reasons:
PAC examples are somewhat unique and look nice
You're been very active recently

Application is a bit messy with plenty of grammatical errors

Haven't got a feel for who you are as a person/ Don't see you get into many RP situations

 

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I have taken all the Feedback from you and I've really tried to put myself in this Application and if you don't, believe me,  I don't mind I know I have and that's all that matter  :yeehaw:

 

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2 hours ago, Tyson said:

@charles the reason its white is because I have pasted it in Grammarly and copied it back into fix errors 

 

All right thanks.

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