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Snow's Event Master Application

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Snow’s Event Master Application

 

Steam Name: ✪ Snow

 

Age: 13

 

Steam ID: https://steamcommunity.com/id/rightfulsnow/

 

In Game Name and Rank: CS Sergeant 07-4 (Snow)

 

Time Played (Server Time): 5 Hours 16 Minutes (Due to recent server reset)

 

Have you had any warns and/or bans (If so state them): No

 

Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them): Cryptic RP

 

Why are you applying to be an event master: I recently participated in my first event and it was so much fun! I really enjoyed playing as an event character and the RP I get to contribute. As well as this while playing on the server I’ve thought of a few events and thought I might like to contribute and help the event master team grow.

 

What can you bring to the event master team: I really like contributing to events and would love to create them. I'm very creative and artsy and absolutely love the imperial era of the Star Wars universe. I also love being a team player and being able to contribute my part towards a greater goal.


 

What can you do to make events more enjoyable and attract more people: I believe people think that briefing and debrief is a hassle so I think making debrief and briefing more fun and excitable. I also think the time before we engage in an event is a bit long so if we cut that time down and get straight into the action people might find it more enjoyable.

 

Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands: No but I can learn quickly!

 

Anything else you would like to add:

I know I'm new to the server and may not be the most experienced but I have to start somewhere and I believe imperial gaming is the best place to start my journey.

 

Please fill out both event ideas and provide much detail as possible

 

Event Idea 1: Empire Day

Story: Imperial forces are to have a break for Empire day to celebrate the creation of the First Galactic Empire. The emperor and the grand army of the empire are gathered on Coruscant celebrating Empire Day when they are caught off guard and are attacked by rebel insurgents. The rebels have planted explosive devices in the Imperial Palace and have sent assassin droids after Emperor Palpatine.

 

Order of Event:

Briefing - Troopers are briefed on their trip to Coruscant by Grand General Aldamar and are told that they are heading to Coruscant for the celebration of the glorious empire.

Hyperspace jump to Coruscant

Troopers are transported off the ship and taken down to the surface (Map Change)

Troopers celebrate and cheer in the streets

Rebels detonate explosives killing multiple civilians and a few imperial personnel

Grand General Aldamar orders the Troopers are split into squads and hunt down the rebels

The Emperor is evacuated from the square

The assassin droids take advantage of the chaos and attempt to murder the emperor!

The assassin droids fail and the emperor is evacuated to the imperial palace

Troopers kill the assassin droids and recover any necessary data from their memory

Rebels place explosives inside of Imperial Palace in a final stitch plan to kill the emperor

Troopers are to protect Palpatine while the bombs are defused by the bomb squad troopers.

The Bomb squad troopers are attacked by rebels and are forced to retreat while backup arrives

Troopers assist in covering the bomb squad troopers and drive off the rebels

The bombs are safely defused and stored for information

Troopers are flown back to the star destroyers

Debrief - Grand General Aldamar assesses the troopers pro’s and con’s

 

Characters Required:

Emperor Palpatine - 1 Player: Must be protected at all costs

Grand General Aldamar - Briefs and debriefs players as well as giving commands

Rebel’s - 4 Players (1400 Hp): Rebels

Bomb squad Troopers - 2 Players (250hp): Defuses explosives and must be protected while doing so.

Assassin Droids - 2 Players (500 Hp): Attempt to assassinate the emperor and are hunted down.

 

Event Idea 2: Imperial Siege

Story: An imperial science facility has been taken over by rebels. The rebels have stolen imperial resources and have created a droid army to protect themselves. The rebels threaten to kill a science official every hour if they are not granted safe passage. Our job is to recapture the science facility and save the science officials.


 

Order of Event:

Tactician Vasch briefs the troopers on his attack strategy to retake the imperial science facility.

Hyperspace to the imperial facility

Land in a black zone and are now on radio silence

Tactician Vasch divides the forces into quarters and attacks the base from 4 different sides.

When the tactician gives the order all forces attack and surrounds the droid army

Once the droids have been destroyed troops must salvage any useful data on the rebels

Troopers push into the facility killing the rebel scum before they have a chance to kill the officials

Rebels threaten to kill the science officials and troopers are forced to stand down

Squad comes out from the back of the facility and kills the rebel scum

Rebels have rigged the facility with explosives and troopers must escort the science officials back to the ship before the base explodes.

Troopers hop onto lambada and dropships

Map change

Debrief with the science officials thanking the troopers

 

Characters:

Tactician Vasch - Briefs and debriefs players as well as giving the commands and plan

Rebel Leader - 1 Player (1000 Hp): Communicate with imperial forces and rebel leader

Rebel Soldier - 4 Players (500 Hp): Hold science officials, hostage

Science Officials - 3 Players (250 Hp): Held hostage and are eventually rescued

 

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Things you can and cannot do/rules:

1. You may bump your application every 7 days after the last

2. Any user may provide feedback by +1 and or -1 your application

3. Advertising your application in OOC, chat box, personally telling people and any sort of social media will lead to your application deny

4. Failing to answer questions can lead to your app being denied

5. False information can lead to your application being denied

6. Failing to meet the requirements can lead to either your ap

7. 5 or more warnings and you application will be denied

8. Must have more than 1 week on the server

9. Must have less than 2 ban to apply (Depending on the situation)




 

Terms

I accept that I am a representative of Imperial Gaming, and that I have been given these powers to make the experience of others better. I understand that advertising my application can get it denied. I accept that I may be demoted at any time by a senior member of staff without prior warning, as long as a valid reason is given. I have read all the rules and understand them completely, if not I will ask a higher staff member for a better explanation.


 

 

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-1 I don’t have any idea who you are. Along with this, your events are very basic and have quite a few lore and story “plot” holes in them. You say that you recently participated in your first events yet you are a Sergeant, which doesn’t make much sense. If you can get more well known around the server and fix the errors in the event, I may consider changing my mind.

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You're applying for Event Master, Yet you state that you have absolutely no knowledge on how to use ULX, The Events in my opinion are quite boring and do not make sense at all.

Secondly, I have no idea who you are, So I cannot trust you with the powers Event Master provides.

  • No idea who you are.
  • Events are quite boring in my opinion.
  • Low Playtime.
  • Has no knowledge on how to use ULX.

If you can improve your application and learn atleast how to use the basic ULX Commands, I may consider changing my opinion.

Good Luck.

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Hi there @Snow, I am afraid that I have to agree with my peers on not supporting your application to join the Event Master team in its current state.  Despite this, you applied, and that shows that you want to help the server grow and prosper, the fact that you applied so early tells this even more so.  Enthusiasm is the key, any you have it. Like many, I believe that a good app reflects a good EM, so I am going to share with you a few pearls of wisdom that could help you edit your current/make a new application.  I have tried to put my points in the same order as they occur in the application.

Age:

While some may see your age as a disadvantage, I see it as an asset for you.  If you can prove to the community that you are mature enough, beyond your years some might say, it will help show everybody that you are responsible enough for this role.

 

SteamID:

While similar and useful, your steam profile is not your steam ID.  Your ID is a code unique to your account that can't be changed, no matter how hard you try.  You can find your ID by searching 'steam ID finder' and entering your profile.  I have taken the liberty of doing so for you (STEAM_0:0:107128809).

 

Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them):

You said that you have been an event master on another server, that is good!  Perhaps you could give us a bit more detail, like what your exact title and role was, and what kind of server it was (clone wars RP, Imperial RP .etc)?

 

Why are you applying to be an event master - What can you do to make events more enjoyable and attract more people?:

The biggest piece of advise I can give you here is elaboration and truth.  I would recommend that you take 5-10 mins to answer each question, and have a think about how each answer will reflect on you.  If you want my opinion on any changes, fell free to sent them to my via the forums PM system.

 

Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands:

You are willing to learn, and that is 99% of the fight.  I have included a few resources below to help you out, including a link to ULX so you can play around server side and a list of commands with help for how to use them.  Experiment and try things, thats the way to go forward!

List of basic commands with simple explanations

ULX addon so you can play around in single player

 

Event 1:

Ahh, empire day, an oldie but a goodie.  I would start by changing the event form empire day to something else a bit more realistic for an attack, like a military parade in an outer rim city.  From there, the rest of the premise is good.  It has a solid story and more importantly, good gameplay.  I would work on expanding your ideas and being a bit more specific.

 

Event 2:

A rescue op, with tactical leanings.  I like it, I like it a lot.  I would focus on making it as believable as possible, make it truly seem like we will lose an important asset if these scientists are killed.

 

General Event tips:

You should specify the exact map, models and weapons you want to use.  If you ask nicely and tell them why, I am sure that staff on the server would give you tools so you could review what we have.

You may not know this, but there is an internal restriction to the maximum rank that Event Masters can set themselves to (Major General is the highest).  You should probably revise your characters to make sure they fit this rule.

Sith are an important part of the server, ans as event masters, we should always strive to include them in events.  Perhaps some magna guards or an ancient riddle could keep them occupied?

 

All in all, there is a lot of work you have to do, but you have taken the first step of your journey of a thousand miles.  If you focus on what I said above, you may yet become an Imperial Gaming event master.  Good luck,

 

Goliath

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4 hours ago, Goliath said:

Hi there @Snow, I am afraid that I have to agree with my peers on not supporting your application to join the Event Master team in its current state.  Despite this, you applied, and that shows that you want to help the server grow and prosper, the fact that you applied so early tells this even more so.  Enthusiasm is the key, any you have it. Like many, I believe that a good app reflects a good EM, so I am going to share with you a few pearls of wisdom that could help you edit your current/make a new application.  I have tried to put my points in the same order as they occur in the application.

Age:

While some may see your age as a disadvantage, I see it as an asset for you.  If you can prove to the community that you are mature enough, beyond your years some might say, it will help show everybody that you are responsible enough for this role.

 

SteamID:

While similar and useful, your steam profile is not your steam ID.  Your ID is a code unique to your account that can't be changed, no matter how hard you try.  You can find your ID by searching 'steam ID finder' and entering your profile.  I have taken the liberty of doing so for you (STEAM_0:0:107128809).

 

Have you been event master on any other servers (If so state them):

You said that you have been an event master on another server, that is good!  Perhaps you could give us a bit more detail, like what your exact title and role was, and what kind of server it was (clone wars RP, Imperial RP .etc)?

 

Why are you applying to be an event master - What can you do to make events more enjoyable and attract more people?:

The biggest piece of advise I can give you here is elaboration and truth.  I would recommend that you take 5-10 mins to answer each question, and have a think about how each answer will reflect on you.  If you want my opinion on any changes, fell free to sent them to my via the forums PM system.

 

Do you have basic knowledge of ulx commands:

You are willing to learn, and that is 99% of the fight.  I have included a few resources below to help you out, including a link to ULX so you can play around server side and a list of commands with help for how to use them.  Experiment and try things, thats the way to go forward!

List of basic commands with simple explanations

ULX addon so you can play around in single player

 

Event 1:

Ahh, empire day, an oldie but a goodie.  I would start by changing the event form empire day to something else a bit more realistic for an attack, like a military parade in an outer rim city.  From there, the rest of the premise is good.  It has a solid story and more importantly, good gameplay.  I would work on expanding your ideas and being a bit more specific.

 

Event 2:

A rescue op, with tactical leanings.  I like it, I like it a lot.  I would focus on making it as believable as possible, make it truly seem like we will lose an important asset if these scientists are killed.

 

General Event tips:

You should specify the exact map, models and weapons you want to use.  If you ask nicely and tell them why, I am sure that staff on the server would give you tools so you could review what we have.

You may not know this, but there is an internal restriction to the maximum rank that Event Masters can set themselves to (Major General is the highest).  You should probably revise your characters to make sure they fit this rule.

Sith are an important part of the server, ans as event masters, we should always strive to include them in events.  Perhaps some magna guards or an ancient riddle could keep them occupied?

 

All in all, there is a lot of work you have to do, but you have taken the first step of your journey of a thousand miles.  If you focus on what I said above, you may yet become an Imperial Gaming event master.  Good luck,

 

Goliath

What Goliath exactly said Snow, try your best! Be determined and enthusiastic! Good luck my dude!

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7 hours ago, Zeta said:

What Goliath exactly said Snow, try your best! Be determined and enthusiastic! Good luck my dude!

Understood, Thanks for the constructive feedback! I'll try my hardest to work on those points and improve. :)

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Small Problem if someone becomes the Emperor for the Event if the real Emperor isn't on. If he dies umm....you just PK'd Palpatine. Even if you say oh he was magnificently revived. Doesn't really work lol

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On 5/9/2018 at 11:29 AM, Boris said:

Small Problem if someone becomes the Emperor for the Event if the real Emperor isn't on. If he dies umm....you just PK'd Palpatine. Even if you say oh he was magnificently revived. Doesn't really work lol

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What Boris said a good idea is to not use any important lore characters try replacing palpating with a brigadier or maj General. another thing is that I haven’t seen you in a while

(might just be me)

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fix your application 

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@Fish Yea sorry I've been heavily inactive lately, I've been doing Assessments upon Assessments As well as Half Yearlies. :/ I'm going to be more active starting June.

 

 

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@Goliath Bit of an update: I've learnt most of the ULX commands and I'm going to start being more active starting in June. Once I get my hours up ill try and reapply with all of your points in consideration. Thank you for your feedback!

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