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Twinkie

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    Snow's Tier 1 Application

    Thought I'd chip in and read through your application, let's get into it. First of all one thing that instantly comes to my attention is this: This is a problem because what this means to me is this: - Since I am apart of the staff team I should have PAC. When becoming a staff member, it doesn't entitle you to the benefits that come with applying for different things. This isn't a valid reason, you are as likely to get it as a user, so ooc/staff rank has no reason to be in your application APART from saying you have earned that rank due to your loyalty blah blah blah, but you haven't said that instead opting to say this: No. This would ruin YOUR reputation because there are plenty of good staff members that show good traits which give the staff team the reputation it has. You are not the staff team, you are not a major part of the staff team, you are a member, one of the many members in the staff team. Basically summing up your first paragraph, you have said: "I should be trusted with PAC because I am a staff member." (at least to me this is basically what your application is saying) Your second paragraph is decent, but instead of adding in situations elaborate a bit more And onto your third and final paragraph, it's basically a clone of your first in terms of structure, meaning you just put unnecessary detail into the paragraph. Removing the unnecessary detail, your application is like this: "I deserve PAC because I have contributed a lot of time to the server." Again! Mentioning your staff rank is no reason as to why you deserve PAC! Like I said before, you are as likely to get PAC as a user, it doesn't matter your staff rank. One thing that also stands out to me is the fact that you only have a week of playtime. You said that you have contributed a lot of time into the server, yet it doesn't seem like it basing it on the playtime you have accumulated over the time you have played, and that was only one month ago. While I was still on the server, I barely even saw you online. I wasn't amazingly active, but I was on most days, and I only remember seeing you once, which means you are either active for short periods of time, or you are just inactive. Either way, it doesn't help. Your PACs are ok I guess, but most of them are the generic hologram or weapons on the back or something. I am still looking forward to the day when we get to see someone with original PAC ideas! Like geez, when will it happen. Your shoulder-cape-thing isn't even correctly placed on the shoulder, which isn't helping with my obsession for perfection! But seriously, you need to step up your PACs, because you aren't wowing anyone at the moment. Final Verdict, Negative Support
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    Kaye's Support Team Application

    no way!!11 :O Big +1, nice guy
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    Fish’ Very late introduction

    who are you lol
  4. -1 Although you are a cool guy I don't believe you are mature enough for this position at the moment.
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    Galle's Tier 1 Application

    @charles @Katelyn don't see why we have to be so critical of him bumping his application before it's seven days, it was clearly a mistake, it's not very hard to count and im sure that Galle can and Charles not being a dick or anything, but jumping on the bandwagon isn't doing any good lmao
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    Ramirez's Trial Moderator Application

    Yes please +1
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    One of my Maps (Being Updated)

    this post has been necro'ed twice lmao probably should get locked
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    Lyric's PAC3 Tier 1 Application

    Yikes. Time for some feedback. ALRIGHT! Firstly we'll start on your application. Play time good, immediate detail looks good, PACs look ok I guess. Your application is very, very, very generic. The normal things such as "I have never broken any rules" or "I have never gotten a warn or ban". I am still looking forward to the day when I can see an ORIGINAL PAC3 Application instead of the generic ones. You tend to repeat yourself sometimes, and half the information in your application isn't need. I'll cut your application down to the points for you. Why should you be trusted with PAC (1 Paragraph): Because I am responsible and have no warns on the server. I would never abuse the privilege of PAC3 and I have a good reputation on the server. Why do you want access to PAC (1 Paragraph): I want access to PAC to further my RP experience. I think that PAC is an amazing tool that makes RP better. Why do you believe you deserve PAC (1 Paragraph): I believe I deserve PAC because I know I'm going to use it for all the right reasons, also I have never broken the rules. I'm known on the server for not breaking the rules and taking RP seriously and being a nice guy. Removing all the unnecessary information, your application looks pretty bland. If you elaborate on your answers more than just stating them, that would be great. Your application also has a few spelling errors, really isn't that important, but it shows your commitment to proofread and how seriously you are taking this application. Moving on to your examples- This is where I believe you think this area is where you are the strongest in, but if I am being honest, the only thing that really stands out to me is that droid-thing, which obviously would've been custom built in PAC3. Apart from that, all you've got are some capes and a little bit of bone-merging which I have basically seen on every single application. Make something original! Like you said in your application make your character have a flare to it, not just the boring old cape and HK leg. Like geez, if I had a dollar for every time I saw something like this I would be as rich as an Arab Prince. But seriously, I know how hard it is to get original ideas for PAC3, it's damn hard, but all you need to do is do some research with custom stuff in lore or something, that'll give you some ideas. You basically just get the same PAC and take a load of different angles of it to make it seem like you have a lot of examples. All we need is about 1 picture for each example, not five! Now onto attitude Now being a glorified forums warrior, I can't see how you act in game, because well I don't play, so I have to judge you on how to react to criticism on the forums, and this is where you are lacking. Instead of replying with formal and polite answers, you tend to (imo), be semi-sarcastic and react with an aggressive tone, which doesn't reflect nicely on you. If I were you I would apologise for how I have acted, and when you said "My PACs are better than most of the accepted ones", that's basically shit-talking a lot of accepted PAC3 users and their abilities. For the reasons I explained above, I have decided on my final verdict. Negative Support
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    Piano's Tier 1 PAC APP

    Now a glorified forums warrior I'll try my best to critique this application fairly First of all, to the eye, your application is very poorly detailed. As the questions state 1 paragraph, it is expected at least 3 sentences, which for me is an average paragraph. In your answers, you only use comma's to join your words together, and I believe that you could elaborate a lot more upon your answers, as what you have said is good but you need to explain it more. Have a look at some other applications to see the standard of writing you need to meet before meeting people's expectations. I have also seen basic spelling mistakes that are easily fixable, so try and run it through something like Grammarly to help you fix up your answers. Other than the writing part of your application, it looks good. You have enough time, a solid RP rank to use PAC, a roleplay rank that actually makes sense to have Pac, and your examples are quite nice to look at. Yes, people may argue that it is basic, "It doesn't have bonemerge!", "He doesn't edit the bones", "It's not cool!". Although these points may be valid to some people, your examples actually make sense and are very appealing to the naked eye. You obviously know what you are doing, and as you said you are not sure if it is someone's custom model, that model is the VF Commander model. If you can show that you are dedicated and loyal to the server, I can see great things coming. Positive Support You can edit it while it is still up, so you don't have to take it down when you want to change it.
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    Death Star Map Post 2

    @Cryo , there are not any applications for building, all building will probably be conducted by the heads of departments or management of the server. The reason why we don't give out tools to random people to add "what they want to the map" is that we just can't trust them if they'll abuse the tools or just make something absolutely horrid. All builds on the current SD are made by trusted builders who know what they are doing.
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    Goodbye?

    Some of you may know the resignation post I put up last week I think and how I said I wasn't leaving the community. Well yeah... So this is my formal goodbye, no longer really have an interest in Gmod anymore, but will still stick around on the forums and probably become a forum warrior or something. But yeah just about a year and a bit over I first joined I am leaving, and probably not coming back anytime soon. A formal thank you to the next few people: @Qtekseven though you don't play anymore, thanks for all those times in Navy @Codythanks for all those 'scary' times in Navy, lucky I'm away from those moments *phew* @WhiteyA few things, being a great Grand Moff, making me apart of the Imperium fragrance project, being an awesome Community Manager and a great person to talk to. Thanks for everything @Jman1308You know I was better! Thanks for being a great friend. @KatelynThanks for putting up for my antics in Inferno for months on end and thanks for giving me a good time in it. This probably isn't goodbye to you though @RallaYou were an awesome friend to have in Inferno, and a great person to work alongside with love you Ralla @Lincoln Turn me up on Teamspeak finally! Geez! But apart from that thanks for being a good friend to have @Uncle_BobbyBYou are still one of the nicest people I have met, good luck Bob, at least you have access to PAC now haha @Fishrawr @PeguinThanks for being a nice guy to tak to @RamirezYou gave me an awesome time in Engineers! Thanks for everything Ramirez! I will always remember that night while you were building shadow bunks, good times. And Finally, @Morganbloody american. Thanks for always being there whether it was to have a chat, to meme with, to minge with (Shh), to complain to, just overall thanks for everything my good friend. I will talk to your sister again, I promise! @EmeraldCannot list how much I will miss you bud. One of my longest friends on IG, and one of the best as well. You were great to do anything with, always fun and exciting, and even more that you have a mic! people i missed who aren't really worth mentioning but ill do it anyway: @Carnifexminge and anime friend, love you, but not that much If I missed someone, I am sorry but these are the only people that came to my mind. As I said above I have uninstalled Garry's Mod, my 3-year journey on it coming to an end, and my SWRP adventure also ending, from the days back on Poseidon to now, it has been a blast. Here is my steam profile link if you want to add me, https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198287981359/, I play a bit of CSGO but mostly mess around in discord now. Final Regards, Twinkie. PS: This is also my resignation from Media Team. @Whitey
  12. Twinkie

    Goodbye?

    I think this is how it is done. 😡
  13. Twinkie

    Goodbye?

    I refuse.
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    Supersoups EM Application

    EDIT: Changing to +1, I have seen that he wants to improve himself and takes into account feedback. Seems like a good bloke.
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    Snoozy PAC3 Tier 1 Application

    Neutral Haven't seen much of you
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    Bevan's PAC3 Tier One Application (V2)

    +1 good guy
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    Pavonis signing out!

    o7
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    Arkan's Late Intro

    hello arkan
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    Snoozy's Introduction

    hello
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    Mordicai's Intro

    hi
  21. Twinkie

    Goodbye?

    no
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